Template:Did you know nominations/Tum Hi Aana

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 16:28, 10 March 2020 (UTC)

Tum Hi Aana

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• ... that according to the composer Payal Dev, she uses multiple instruments in the 2019 song "Tum Hi Aana" to "give it the right amount of emotions"? Source: http://www.radioandmusic.com/entertainment/editorial/news/200108-tum-hi-aana-makes-me-feel-lucky-composer

• Reviewed: Simmeringer Had

Created by CAPTAIN MEDUSA (talk). Self-nominated at 13:13, 29 January 2020 (UTC).

• QPQ still needed

• Prose size (text only): 4505 characters (785 words) "readable prose size"
• Article considered new, Violation Unlikely 36.7%
• I think the hook could be shortened as: " ... that composer Payal Dev played multiple instruments in the 2019 song "Tum Hi Aana" to "give it the right amount of emotions"?
• I would like the nominator to check the translation of the article, as some phrases sound really awkward (the singer Jubin Nautiyal was there at the sitting who "instantly loved it and accepted to record a scratch of the song", and that how she explains how the song was created, for example). Paparazzzi (talk) 07:54, 2 February 2020 (UTC)
  • Hey Paparazzzi, I have completed my QPQ and done some copyediting. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 08:59, 2 February 2020 (UTC)
    • @CAPTAIN MEDUSA: Hi, I still think the word "used" should be replaced with "played". I also think the performer of the track should be mention, since Payal is not the one singing it. Regards, Paparazzzi (talk) 05:17, 3 February 2020 (UTC)
  • ALT1: ... that composer Payal Dev played multiple instruments in the Jubin Nautiyal's 2019 song "Tum Hi Aana" to "give it the right amount of emotions"? ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 06:38, 3 February 2020 (UTC)
    • Paparazzzi, Done. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 06:38, 3 February 2020 (UTC)
      • Hook ALT1 approved . Wait for another user to promote it. Regards, Paparazzzi (talk) 23:56, 6 February 2020 (UTC)

• Hi, I came by to promote ALT1, but I don't see the hook fact in the cite given (footnote 4). Yoninah (talk) 01:15, 17 February 2020 (UTC)

• Yoninah,  Fixed: now I have added the correct ref. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 16:07, 10 March 2020 (UTC)

• Thank you. Restoring tick for ALT1. Yoninah (talk) 16:26, 10 March 2020 (UTC)