Template:Did you know nominations/Verma Panton

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 11:50, 20 October 2015 (UTC)

Verma Panton[edit]

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... that the first female architect from the West Indies was the Jamaican Verma Panton?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Buttermilk Creek (Susquehanna River)
Comment: For WikiProject Women in Red architecture editathon

Created by SusunW (talk). Self-nominated at 16:35, 14 October 2015 (UTC).

The article was nominated within 1 day of creation and is well over 1500 characters. The article reads neutrally, has in-line citations, and i'm not seeing any issues of close paraphrasing. Good job, actually, on extending sources with just listings of single item achievements into full sentence coverage in the Wiki article. You've done well at varying the sentences too so they don't sound repetitive. Anyways, the hook is within 200 characters, is interesting, neutral, and cited in-line (I extended one of the refs to cover the lede since that's where the hook is from, hope you don't mind. Hooks are required to have direct in-line citation. Stupid rule, I know.) The QPQ has been done and there is no image to review. This article is good to go. Silver seren^C 20:59, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

I've tweaked the hook wording to avoid repeating "architect". Edwardx (talk) 22:27, 16 October 2015 (UTC)

It sounds good to me. @SusunW:, you okay with it? Silver seren^C 05:47, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

Totally fine. SusunW (talk) 05:49, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

Still good to go then. Silver seren^C 17:34, 17 October 2015 (UTC)