Template:Did you know nominations/Yoram Tsafrir

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The result was: promoted by Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 13:25, 5 May 2013 (UTC).

Yoram Tsafrir[edit]

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... that Yoram Tsafrir was the superintendent of the Holyland Model of Jerusalem (pictured)?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Thomas Pennant

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Rosiestep (talk),Nvvchar (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 00:36, 16 April 2013 (UTC).

Added an img.--Nvvchar. 09:48, 16 April 2013 (UTC)

While long and new enough, there's a bunch of facts in the first sentence of the biography section, but no inline citation afterwards. Make sure it is cited, please. I'm also curious how you got that estimate of Tsafrir's birth date. Hook is ok and cited, and I don't see hints of plagiarism or close paraphrasing. —♦♦ AMBER^(ЯʘCK) 20:19, 29 April 2013 (UTC)

The ref at the end of the paragraph pertains to the entire paragraph, but I've repeated the hook for sentence1 and sentence2 for clarification. --Rosiestep (talk) 03:10, 30 April 2013 (UTC)

Thank you. That leaves me with one concern: his birth date is estimated to be around 1955. How and why? —♦♦ AMBER^(ЯʘCK) 16:12, 30 April 2013 (UTC)

It's been a few days, and my concerns have not been adressed. Please do so in the next couple of days.—♦♦ AMBER^(ЯʘCK) 10:19, 5 May 2013 (UTC)

I have deleted the year of birth, as the relevant reference is eluding me. I hope it is fine now. Thanks.--Nvvchar. 11:40, 5 May 2013 (UTC)

It is! —♦♦ AMBER^(ЯʘCK) 12:15, 5 May 2013 (UTC)