Template talk:Did you know/Eden II

Eden II[edit]

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk)

... that Eden II, a public art installation within the Indianapolis Museum of Art's 100 Acres, consists of a guard house and a ship which suggest that refugees on board were driven out by "the ecological impact of climate change."

Reviewed: Beaumont High School (St. Louis, Missouri)

Created by Zambonia (talk). Nominated by LoriLee (talk) at 12:27, 31 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:

Hook

Length, format, content rules: Hook is too long. ALT suggested below. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:58, 10 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Source: Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:58, 10 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Interest: Rather low. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:58, 10 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Image suitability, if applicable: None. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:58, 10 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
ALT hooks, if proposed:

ALT1 ~~... that Eden II consists of a guard house and a ship which suggest that refugees on board were driven out by "the ecological impact of climate change"?~~

ALT2: ... that Eden II, an art installation within the Indianapolis Museum of Art's 100 Acres, features a mock refugee ship to highlight the problem of climate change? Gatoclass (talk) 05:14, 21 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Article

Length: Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:58, 10 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Vintage: Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:58, 10 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): Bare URLs and only one third party source? No. Notability is not shown. Also, some stuff does not check out (like the speakers playing weather forecasts... that's not in the source. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:58, 10 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Neutrality: Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:58, 10 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Plagiarism/close paraphrasing: Worried about this. This page and the text cited to it (specifically the description of the multimedia) are quite similar. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:58, 10 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Copyvio: The U.S. doesn't have freedom of panorama, so this image is still copyrighted. I will tag it at the commons. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:58, 10 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting:

Comments/discussion:

This is probably not going to happen, for the above reasons. If the nominator can fix it, though, that would be greatly appreciated. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:58, 10 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

No responses in a week. Notability not shown with reliable sources, so this is going to be prodded. Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:42, 18 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Looks better, but has some bare URLs. Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:28, 19 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Verified ALT2. The bare urls have been fixed. Gatoclass (talk) 05:14, 21 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]