User:Joshua Jonathan/Paraphrasing

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Table[edit]

1-10[edit]

Number Diff Source Problem? Fixed? Comment
1 Indian religions [1] Close paraphrasing Fixed [2] Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:24, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
2 History of India [3]-[4] Close paraphrasing Fixed [5]
2-A Hinduism [6] Close paraphrasing Paraphrased diff and shortened diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 13:29, 26 March 2015 (UTC)
3 Gautama Buddha [7] Quotation marks missing in attributed and referenced info Quotation marks added diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:42, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
4 Bardo Thodol [8] Sourced list of possible translations of bodhi and nirvana, as given by Freemantle 2001 Quotation marks added diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:47, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
5 Bardo Thodol [9] Quotation marks and reference missing Aded quotation marks, attribution, reference. Missing reference must have been simply forgotten. diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:57, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
6 Hindutva [10] ? Text has been removed
7 Karma in Buddhism [11]-[12] Quotation marks missing in attributed and referenced line Added quotation marks diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 06:05, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
8 Buddhism [13] Idem as 7; same line Idem as 7 diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 06:10, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
9 Aro gTér [14] ? Section has been removed
10 Sarasvati River Mukherjee, Ashoke (2001), "RIGVEDIC SARASVATI: MYTH AND REALITY" (PDF), Breakthrough, Breakthrough Science Society, Vol. 9 No. 1, january 2001 One word, maybe Removed one word diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 06:16, 7 March 2015 (UTC)

11-20[edit]

Number Diff Source Problem? Fixed? Comment
11 Sarasvati River Annette Wilke & Oliver Moebus (2011), "Sound and Communication: An Aesthetic Cultural History of Sanskrit Hinduism," Walter de Gruyter, p.310 note 574; Catherine Ludvík (2007), "Sarasvatī, Riverine Goddess of Knowledge", BRILL, p.85; Witzel 2012 Qutation marks missing in attributed and referenced line Added quotation-marks diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 06:38, 7 March 2015 (UTC) refs in article already stated: "{{sfn|Witzel|2012|p=74, 125, 133}}<ref>Wilke p.310 note 574 quoting Witzel</ref><ref name="CL">Ludvík p.85, quoting Witzel</ref>"
12 Indo-Aryan migration theory [15] paraphrasing? -
13 Satyananda Saraswati difftool: [16] [17] Paraphrasing? -
14 Language shift [18]-[19]-[20] Close paraphrasing Fixed diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 06:26, 28 February 2015 (UTC)
15 Dzogchen [21] 8 words "This transaltion (sic) became widely known and popular as" Fixed: changed into "popularized as" diff] Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 06:48, 7 March 2015 (UTC) Nice typos
16 Malasana [22] Quotation-marks missing in two referenced lines Removed diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 13:13, 26 March 2015 (UTC)
17 Malasana [23](see [24]) Close paraphrasing Paraphrased diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 13:15, 26 March 2015 (UTC)
18 Hindutva [25] Combination of two quotes Removed by Blades diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 13:29, 26 March 2015 (UTC) Edit-summary by Blades: "we don't bring sfn style everywhere, these changes clearly require agreement", where-after he requested page-protection
19 Hindutva [26] Idem Idem Idem
20 Neo-Advaita (Ramana Maharshi) [27] No problem; properly quoted -

21-30[edit]

Number Diff Source Problem? Fixed? Comment
21 [28] [29] No quotation-marks in attributed and referenced line Added quotation-marks diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 14:05, 26 March 2015 (UTC) This one is really fascinating. Blades Googled "the divine, the absolute, exists within all human beings regardless of social status" and "as the essence of others will promote love and social harmony", and found Burman (2002), Hindu-Muslim Syncretic Shrines and Communities, Mittal Publications, which contains the exact sentences, but referenced to Lopez Jr. 1995, while I clearly gave Flood (1996) p.258 as my source. I can't check Lopez Jr. (1995) in Burman(2002), but Flood 1996 definitely also contains the same sentence. Donald Lopez (2004), Buddhist Scriptures, contains a nice overview. Lopez 1995 may be either "Buddhism in Practice", Princeton University Press, or Curators of the Buddha: The Study of the Buddha Under Colonialism, Chicago University Press. Unfortunately, Goog;e doesn't help me futher here, but it's curious...
22 [30] [31] (realization of the nature of reality via , mode' (tshul) or a 'view' (lta ba) ... applied within deity yoga) Close paraphrasing Full quote diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 14:14, 26 March 2015 (UTC) Great author; read him!
23 [32] [33]-[34] Tja... Close paraphrasing? - Close paraphrasing indeed; too close? I don't know.
24 [35] Piya Tan (2004), The Taming of the Bull. Mind-training and the formation of Buddhist traditions, dharmafarer.org Attributed and referenced quote without quotation-marks. Removed whole list diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 14:32, 26 March 2015 (UTC) This was added within a quotation-tag. It was not there anymore at 26 march 2015; I've removed the whole list, since it's very terse, and rewriting won't really improve it. I've added a note with a link to the site.
25 [36] [37] Attributed and referenced translation by Senzaki Nyogen (千崎如幻) (1876–1958) and Paul Reps (1895-1990); sourced by Buddhistdoor.com. - The "source" given here is one of many publications in which this text appears. Very sloppy work. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:42, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
26 [38] [39](see [40]) Words? - Tja... The Ten Bulls again; abundantly referenced. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:42, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
27 [41] [42] Close paraphrasing in referenced text Added Attribution and quotation-marks; changed paraphrasing into full quote diff. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:47, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
28 Bhagavad Gita [43](below of page) Properly quoted and referenced text - The search-string even includes the quotation-marks which are in the Wiki-article... Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:50, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
29 [44] [45](and long quotes) Close paraphrasing in attributed and referenced line Changed phrasing diff. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:57, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
30 [46] So, the characters {{sfn|Doniger|1999|p=1017}} is a copy-vio? Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:43, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

31-40[edit]

Number Diff Source Problem? Fixed? Comment
31-1 Smarta Tradition Hiltebeitel 2013 p.18 [47] pagenumbers, close paraphrasing, typo Fixed [48] Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 07:27, 7 March 2015 (UTC)
31-2 Smarta Tradition Hiltebeitel 2013 p.18 [49]
32 Indian religions same as 31-1, 31-2 same as 31-1, 31-2 Fixed diff Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 09:05, 7 March 2015 (UTC)
33 Nondualism N.K. Singh and A.P. Mishra (2010), Global Encyclopaedia of Indian Philosophy, Volume 1 No. List of links. Nothing to fix. A Google search on "embodies the very principle of enlightenment" and "knows no limits or boundaries" "which manifests in time and space"; none of these lines appear in the edit in question. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 15:23, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
34 Nondualism Advaita Vision, Discrimination No. Qutes from website with quotation-marks and reference. - Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 15:32, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
35 Vipassana movement Robert H. Sharf, Buddhist Modernism and the Rhetorics of Meditative Experience (see [50]) Close paraphrasing. Changed a few words diff. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 15:41, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
36 Higher consciousness Michael Whiteman, Philosophy of Space and Time: And the Inner Constitution of Nature No. Qutations with quotation-marks and references. Nothing to fix. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 15:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
37 Sunyata Candradhara Śarmā, aja%2C%20the%20unborn%20eternal.&f=false-The Advaita Tradition in Indian Philosophy: A Study of Advaita in Buddhism, Vedānta and Kāshmīra Shaivism No. Unless the word "fundamental" is problematic. Nothing to fix. Nice book, but subjective. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 15:50, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
38 Nondualism Leesa S. Davis, advaya%20and%20advaita%20Advaya%22%20is%20knowledge%20free%20from%20the%20duality&f=false Advaita Vedanta and Zen Buddhism: Deconstructive Modes of Spiritual Inquiry, quoting Murti, who follows Bhattacharya... Murti: "A distinction ... must be made" versus "a distinction can be made". Trivial. Line is removed anyway. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 15:58, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
39 Nondualism [51] No. Quotes with quotation-marks and reference. Nothing to fix. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 16:05, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
40 Buddhism [52]

41-50[edit]

Number Diff Source Problem? Fixed? Comment
41 [53] [54] No problem:a ttributed, quotemarked, sourced Nothing to fix. The real source is Michael Hawley, Sarvepalli Radhakrishnan (1888—1975), Internet Encyclopedia of Philosophy, as is clearly stated in the diff. Sloppy.
42 [55] words [56]
43 Korean Seon ([57] (original article had that sentence, entirely different)) words [58]
44 [59] words [60]
45 [61] words [62] or [63](an Iranian cultural...)
46 [64] words [65] "as the culmination of", and next few lines.
47 [66] words [67]
48 [68] words [69]
49 Hinduism words [70]
50 [71] words [72]

51-60[edit]

Number Diff Source Problem? Fixed? Comment
51 Kensho words [73] so is current [74]
52 [75] words [76]
53 Advaita Vedanta words [77]
54 [78] words [79]
55 [80] words [81]
56 [82] words [83]
57 Dhyana in Buddhism words [84]
58 [85] words [86]
59 Nirvana (Buddhism) [87]
60 Four Noble Truths words [88]

61-71[edit]

Number Diff Source Problem? Fixed? Comment
61 Four Noble Truths words Added quotation-marks Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 16:46, 2 March 2015 (UTC) [89]
62 [90] words [91]
63 [92] words [93]
64 [94] words [95]
65 [96] words [97]
66 [98] words [99]
67 [100] words [101]
68 Ramana Maharshi words [102]
69 Zen words [103]-[104]
70 Spirituality words [105]-[106] (including (12c.) )
71 [107] words [108]

72-80[edit]

Number Diff Source Problem? Fixed? Comment
72 [109] [110] [111]
73 [112] [113]
74 [114] [115]
75 [116] [117]-[118]
76 Big Mind Process [119]
77 [120] [121] Clear quote: attributed, indented with quote-template, referenced - ?!?
78 [122] (174 words) [123]
79 Vedanga Jyotisha (176 words) [124]
80 [125] [126]

81-90[edit]

Number Diff Source Problem? Fixed? Comment


81 [127] (131) [128]
82 Mysticism (310) [129]
83 [130] (135) [131]
84 [132] (203) [133]
85 [134] (135) [135]
86 [136] 165 [137]
87 [138] [139]
88 [140] [141]
89 [142] [143]
90 [144] [145]

91-100[edit]

Number Diff Source Problem? Fixed? Comment


91 [146] [147]
92 [148] 267 [149]
93 [150] 327 words [151]
94 [152] [153]
95 [154] 298 words That is not available online anymore, text can be also found at [155]
96 Neo-Advaita [http://ijrcm.org.in/download.php?name=ijrcm-4-Ivol-1_issue-1_art-6.pdf&path=uploaddata/ijrcm-4-Ivol-1_issue-1_art-6.pdf

http://webcache.googleusercontent.com/search?q=cache:7KUjzxrmuBMJ:ijrcm.org.in/download.php%3Fname%3Dijrcm-4-Ivol-1_issue-1_art-6.pdf%26path%3Duploaddata/ijrcm-4-Ivol-1_issue-1_art-6.pdf+&cd=4&hl=en&ct=clnk&gl=in]

97 Pre-sectarian Buddhism [156]
98 [157] [158]
99 Ramana_Maharshi [159]
100 [160] [161]

101-110[edit]

Number Diff Source Problem? Fixed? Comment


101 [162] [163]
102 [164] [165]
103 [166] [167]
104 [168] [169]
105 [170] [171]
106 D. T. Suzuki 114 words [172]
107 [173] 101 words [174]
108 [175] (101 words, 164 words) [176]-[177]
109 Vipassana movement [178]
110 [179] [180]

111-120[edit]

Number Diff Source Problem? Fixed? Comment


111 [181] [182]
112 [183] [184]
113 [185] [186]
114 [187] 457 words [188]-[189]-[http://www.tonglen.oceandrop.org/Karma.htm

]-[190]

115 Dharma transmission [191]
116 [192] 153 words [193]
117 [194] 220 words [195]
118 [196] [197]
119 [198] [199]-[200]
120 [201] [202]

121-136[edit]

Number Diff Source Problem? Fixed? Comment


121 [203] [204]
122 [205] [206]
123 [207] [208]
124 [209] [210]
125 [211] [212]
126 [213] [214]

Other issues noted by Blades[edit]

Zen[edit]

Zen and Sutras[edit]

Matchable to:

Zen ranks and hierarchy[edit]

Zen_Narratives[edit]

  • Only original section of a fork article is infringing copyrights - Comment by JJ: Zen-article became to huge; content was split-off, as explained. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:31, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

Doctrinal background of Zen[edit]

Forked: Zen.

Comment by JJ: Zen-article became to huge; content was split-off, as explained. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:31, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

Chan Buddhism[edit]

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chan_Buddhism

Forked Zen: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Chan_Buddhism&diff=465607610&oldid=2820833

Comment by JJ: Zen-article became to huge; content was split-off, as explained. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:31, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

Zen organisation and institutions[edit]

  • Forked article - Comment by JJ: Zen-article became to huge; content was split-off, as explained. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:31, 10 July 2015 (UTC)
  • and copyvio, example :
  • [232] Copied: [233] - JJ: Tja... A lot of book-titles are "duplicated," which may be expected when sourcing quotes and info. Summary of Koné's article uses phrases from that article; it's attributed and sourced. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 10:13, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

Other Zen-stuff[edit]

Five Ranks[edit]

Version before :

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Five_Ranks&oldid=394087227

After that:

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Five_Ranks&diff=474912853&oldid=474911910

copied: [234]

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Five_Ranks&diff=474911910&oldid=474910552

Copied: [235]

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Five_Ranks&diff=465458537&oldid=463500775

Copied : [236]

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Five_Ranks&diff=474918112&oldid=474915416

Copied : http://www.sacred-texts.com/bud/zen/mumonkan.htm

Zen lineage charts[edit]

Forked: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zen_lineage_charts#History

Copied : [237], [238]

Other articles[edit]

Monism[edit]

Warning.[239]

Commment by JJ: Here's the message. That was indeed copied , although paraphrased; the author wrote a splendid piece, which I could not improve, only paraphrase, but too closely. Nevertheless, the source was clearly give, a couple of dozen of times. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:31, 10 July 2015 (UTC)

Neo-Advaita[edit]

  1. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Neo-Advaita#Neo-Advaita_disregards_traditional_practice

Copied: http://www.advaita.org.uk/interviews/dennis_waite1.html

Yoga physiology[edit]

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yoga_physiology

Forked.

Sex-androgyny in mythology[edit]

Sex-androgyny in mythology copies [240]-[241]-[242]-[243]-[244] mostly A Garland of Feminist Reflections: Forty Years of Religious Exploration.

Comment by JJ: Split-off from Nondualism; content was not added by me. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:31, 10 July 2015 (UTC)
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