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Margaret Troup Laws was born as the fifth child of a rich educational atmosphere family in Aberdeen, Scotland on September 2nd,1849. She received missionary education in the Sunday School run by Janet Melville and met her medical-missionary husband Robert Laws, there. She spent almost 40 years in Livingstonia, Nyasaland, teaching the Chinyanja Language and producing regional and educational materials on that language. Her only child, Amelia Nyasa Laws, was sent back to Scotland to study at eight years old. Later, Margaret came to Scotland when her health condition worsened, and finally passed away in Edinburgh, Scotland on September 17th,1921.^[1]^[2]

^ Ewan, Elizabeth; Pipes, Rose; Rendall, Jane; Reynolds, Siân (2019). The New Biographical Dictionary of Scottish Women. pp. 240–241. ISBN 978-1-4744-3627-4.
^ "Margaret Troup Gray Laws". Find a Grave. February 6th,2016. Retrieved November 7th,2023. {{cite web}}: Check date values in: |access-date= and |date= (help)

[1] Ewan, Elizabeth; Pipes, Rose; Rendall, Jane; Reynolds, Siân (2019). The New Biographical Dictionary of Scottish Women. pp. 240–241. ISBN 978-1-4744-3627-4.

[2] "Margaret Troup Gray Laws". Find a Grave. February 6th,2016. Retrieved November 7th,2023. {{cite web}}: Check date values in: |access-date= and |date= (help)

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