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Declined by TechnoSquirrel69 3 months ago. Last edited by TechnoSquirrel69 3 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Osama Sarhan is a machine learning expert known for his work in natural language processing, open-source contributions, and machine translation.

1. Education

He holds a Master's degree in Information Technology - Software Engineering.

1. Professional Experience

Osama has been involved in several projects, demonstrating expertise in cloud algorithms, privacy, systems predictions, AI models, and blockchain.

1. Wolfram Summer School Alumni 2021

Osama participated in the Wolfram Summer School Alumni 2021 program. During this program, he worked on a project related to computing hydrocarbon chemical reactions based on graphs.

Learn more about Osama's work on his [GitHub profile](https://github.com/osamasarhan).

1. External References

- KaggleX Mentorship Program Project Showcase: [KaggleX Mentorship Program Project Showcase](https://www.kaggle.com/cohort2-2023-project-showcase) - Wolfram Summer School Alumni 2021: [Wolfram Summer School Alumni 2021](https://education.wolfram.com/summer-school/alumni/2021/osama-sarhan/) - GitHub: [osamasarhan (Osama Sarhan) · GitHub](https://github.com/osamasarhan)

Source: Osama Sarhan, 1/28/2024

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