User talk:מיכל פידי

Your submission at Articles for creation: Doron Bergerbest-Eilon (August 29)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Qcne (talk) 12:22, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

Hello, מיכל פידי! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Qcne (talk) 12:22, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

Dear @Qcne,

I'm afraid I do not understand the reason of which my article was not accepted. I highly believe in it and the fact that this Major General is important and coalified to have his own article on Wikipedia. I would like to improve the article and fix whatever is needed in order to allow it to be publish.

Would you be able to guide me through it? מיכל פידי (talk) 10:04, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

Hi @מיכל פידי. Before we look at his notability, you first need to put in-line citations throughout the draft text. Every single paragraph and statement must have an associated citation which is automatically linked to a reference source. And the text should only be a paraphrase of that source.

Your current draft only has four in-line citations, in the At ASERO Worldwide, Ltd and At Aperio Systems sections. This is far too little. How can any reader verify all the rest of the text? His date of birth, his education, his career? We can't just take your word for it.

If you read WP:BLP and carefully read the Reliable sources section you will see we require every single piece of material to have a source with an in-line citation.

There are some other problems with the draft too: you have WP:PEACOCK wording which breaches the strict WP:NPOV policy, and you have far too many External links, please read WP:EXTERNAL.

But focus on the in-line citations first, as that is the most pressing issue. If you need help, follow the instructions at WP:INTREFVE.

Let me know if that helps, Qcne (talk) 10:12, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Red Skies (TV series) has been accepted

Red Skies (TV series), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Cambalachero (talk) 15:40, 4 September 2023 (UTC)

Thank you so much. I have a question. I was trying to link the article to the same article that exsitד already in Wikipedia in Hebrew https://he.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D7%A9%D7%9E%D7%99%D7%9D_%D7%90%D7%93%D7%95%D7%9E%D7%99%D7%9D_(%D7%A1%D7%93%D7%A8%D7%AA_%D7%98%D7%9C%D7%95%D7%95%D7%99%D7%96%D7%99%D7%94_%D7%99%D7%A9%D7%A8%D7%90%D7%9C%D7%99%D7%AA) but for some reason I cannot do it.

would you be able to help me with it? מיכל פידי (talk) 14:29, 6 September 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Doron Bergerbest-Eilon (October 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Johannes Maximilian was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Doron Bergerbest-Eilon and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 15:02, 8 October 2023 (UTC)