User talk:12.168.6.143

Re: Zero no Tsukaima

She treats Saito like a dog, making him lie on a straw bed, and even getting naked in front of him at first. She used to make him dress her and still makes him wash all of her clothes (including her underwear). As is typical of Rie Kugimiya's voice roles as tsundere type characters, Louise at first hates Saito, but because of various situations, grows fond of him or even thoughts of love. Even so, when she thinks (momentously determined by Louise herself to be) he has perverted thoughts about other girls and when she is jealous of or mad at him, she beats him with a whip and later gets into the habit of kicking him in the groin from behind on multiple occasions or blowing up Saito with magic. In one instance, she whipped him for hours until he had wounds all over his body (Though somehow, all the wounds would always disappear in a later scene and later on buys a more brutal type of whip. All this is intended in a comical manner and is seen much more as the story progresses.

Errors in italics.

"at first" - grammatically incorrect placing

"d" - should be third person past tense "used"

"or even thoughts of love" - grammatically incorrect She whats thoughts of love? Has?

"Even so..." - Enormous run-on sentence. The word "momentously" is used incorrectly. Improper punctuation.

"In one instance..." - Does this really belong on the main page when it is just taking up space and could be on the character page instead? Is this really one instance? Is it necessary to explain to the readers of Wikipedia what slapstick is?

"All this" - As above, but I left the disclaimer in, if we really need it.

May 2009

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