User talk:67.169.189.146

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Hello, 67.169.189.146. You have new messages at KGirlTrucker81's talk page.
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KGirl ^{(Wanna chat?)} 11:39, 27 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Pandit Amarnath (July 30)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Primefac was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The one added source is simply a name drop, and offers no significant coverage or information to be added to the page. As stated by the previous reviewer - one source just isn't good enough. There was a comment made that because he lived in the '40s there is no online coverage, but offline sources are acceptable. Please add additional independent reliable sources that discuss the subject in detail. Additionally, there is a ton of promotional language ("brother of the well-known music duo", "like the famous giitaayan site", etc) that needs to be trimmed.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Primefac (talk) 03:08, 30 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

September 2017[edit]

Hello, I'm Jim1138. I noticed that you made a change to an article, Manohar Lal Khattar, but you didn't provide a source. I’ve removed it for now, but if you’d like to include a citation to a reliable source and re-add it, please do so! If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Jim1138 (talk) 03:38, 16 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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