User talk:8isfate/3racha Sandbox subpage
Review[edit]
Excellent start! I made a few edits (see your page's history). When you've addressed my suggestions, please proceed according to the directions in the syllabus.
- moving citations after terminating periods
- finish references and fix those showing red text
- explain what is meant by "training"
- move to mainspace
- once it's live, make sure it's not a Wikipedia:Orphan
- and add categories then too
- maybe a photo (?)