User talk:Abond3/sandbox

Review: Hey Allan, I think you did a great job in the description of the The Temple of Saturn. However, I do think that you could add more detail to the description and symbolism. You could maybe expand the importance of the temple on the culture and society of Rome. I think you could also talk about more than just one temple, examining those same features. I noticed that on the Wikipedia page for the Roman Forum there was a lack of information pertaining to the Monuments. I think this is really an opportunity to expand on your knowledge and delve into the research. Also, I think there id additional research that can be done on preservation efforts. Great work!! Fyoliveira1 (talk) 22:11, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

Review: Hey, Alan. You did a really great job of outlining the topic of the temple of Saturn and how you plan to lay out the details in your discussion of it. I would certainly make sure that you expand on those details to the fullest to maximize your contributions to the article. For example, why was the building of such high cultural importance? Why was it so often utilized? Why was it replaced with Saturn? I would love to see how much further you can delve into the research and fill in the outline you already have, as I'm sure there's a lot of it. Great start! Markdferreira (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 12:57, 21 April 2017 (UTC)

I think this is a fantastic topic to write about because of the importance the Temple has had for as long of a time as it has. I also think that its really interesting that there is a lot of mystery surrounding the building still in terms of why it was built and the fact that the name was changed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fontenez (talk • contribs) 19:00, 21 April 2017 (UTC)