User talk:Ajmorrill
Remember that if something is a main topic, it should have at least two sub-topics; subtopics should have at least two sub-subtopics. Also, start working on the intro paragraph that goes before the table of contents. Also, add the title. You are off to a good start. Hagen76 (talk) 20:37, 14 May 2011 (UTC)
Draft Review[edit]
| Required Element | Not Present | Present-Needs Much Work | Present-Acceptable |
|---|---|---|---|
| Introductory paragraph | x | ||
| At least three sections in the main body | yes-but some are incomplete | ||
| At least three original figures | x | ||
| At least one original data table | incomplete, no refs | ||
| At least two properly formatted mathematical equations | need 1 more | ||
| At least 4 in-text links to other Wikipedia articles | x | ||
| At least 8 references in your endnotes | x |
Also, check spelling and balance the equation. Hagen76 (talk) 07:37, 31 May 2011 (UTC)