User talk:Akochanwata

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 14:40, 14 March 2013 (UTC)

March 2013

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Still not quite right

Please scroll down to the long list of links you have. Note how some still appear in a big gray box:

 like so

I see you moved them further left, but make sure they're all the way to the left, and have a "*" at the start of them. See the ones I fixed, the first three or so? Make sure every line starts like that.

Once the formatting is clean, we can begin reviewing content at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Dareysteel. Don't get disenheartened, these always take several or even many tries to get articles accepted.

In the meantime ensure you read WP:Notability (music) so you can understand what the requirements are for music articles, so that you will better understand the advice you get in the next review, and will be able to more effectively do that advice.

Just as a heads-up, a lot (though not all) of your sources do not meet the requirements of WP:Reliable sources. So some of those we're going to end up removing, so be ready to work with us on that (and please read that RS policy I just linked).

MatthewVanitas (talk) 21:05, 10 October 2013 (UTC)

See comments at top of draft, and further down in References section (all hilited)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Dareysteel. MatthewVanitas (talk) 15:38, 11 October 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dareysteel (November 16)

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! APerson (talk!) 14:46, 16 November 2013 (UTC)