User talk:AriZonaRosa

Is this ready to go live?

{{helpme}} I don't want to get deleted on my first push out to live. Just checking if this article meets all the standards: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AriZonaRosa/John_Dougherty_%28Journalist%29 thanks : ) AriZonaRosa (talk) 23:30, 28 June 2010 (UTC)

Hi. I had a quick look; it could do with a bit of tweaking, and I'll do that now. Best, talk to us live, with this. Otherwise, I'll write more here in a bit. Chzz  ►  00:19, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

Ok, some tips and advice;

• When you link to a page like 'User:AriZonaRosa/John Dougherty (Journalist)" (as you did above), instead of putting the full URL, use just [[User:AriZonaRosa/John Dougherty (Journalist)]] - a wikilink. Like, e.g., I am from [[England]]. I am a [[Dentistry|dentist]]. My user page is [[User:Chzz]]. which makes: I am from England. I am a dentist. My user page is User:Chzz.

Re. User:AriZonaRosa/John Dougherty (Journalist)

Some things that I really thing need sorting out;

• "Career" section - any references for that?
• "The Keating Five" - only the first part is verifiable
• "Governor Fife Symington" - He continued his relentless coverage - non-neutral, unreferenced claims; WP:PEACOCK etc.

I hope you'll take this as constructive criticism; if you can sort those problems out, feel free to ask for a re-check.

For more help, you can either;

• Leave a message on my own talk page; OR
• Use a {{helpme}} - please create a new section at the end of your own talk page, put {{helpme}}, and ask your question - remember to 'sign' your name by putting ~~~~ at the end; OR
• Talk to us live, with this or this.

The last of those is particularly useful - please try it; pop in now and say hello. Chzz  ►  01:23, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

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Hi, you have new messages here. Thanks. Chevymontecarlo 05:37, 29 June 2010 (UTC)