User talk:AustinJames

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:19, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

After reviewing the wiki page "Theory X and Theory Y" I think there are many updates and additions that can be made to create a higher quality page. Below are the changes I think can be made.

- I think the introduction could be more precise. Specifically when talking about what each theory is based on.

- Under the Theory X tab - I don't like how the writer uses the word generally (we could flesh this out).

- I think having an example of a real world situation that each one of the theory's applies to would be nice to have, especially for the novice reader (this could be it's own section).

- I think the section "evaluate the workplace" could go into more detail - more about contingency theory. It does not say much or use any examples.

- I think there is room for improvement in the "McGregor and Maslow's Hierarchy of need relationship" section.

- One thing that has been brought up previously and one thing I agree with fully is the lack of sources. I think we can bring this pages rating up by finding reliable sources and adding accurate information.

AustinJames (talk) 00:06, 15 February 2018 (UTC)