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Your submission at Articles for creation: Project Manas (May 13)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Primefac was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The India Times article is the only piece that is both independent and detailed in coverage. Everything else is either a PRIMARY source or just a one-paragraph mention in a list of similar groups. In other words, there is way too much information in this draft relative to the actual sourcing. Please add additional independent reliable sources that discuss the subject in detail. See WP:REFB section 3.1 for more information about adding inline references.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Primefac (talk) 13:33, 13 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Draft:Project Manas[edit]

I'm sorry, but this still looks promotional. My advice is to remove all but a lead phrased neutrally. This should then be sourced. You should proceed one sentence at a time, taking care to use non-promotional language, with a source for each sentence.Dlohcierekim (talk) 16:38, 16 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

MfD nomination of Draft:Project Manas[edit]

Draft:Project Manas, a page which you created or substantially contributed to (or which is in your userspace), has been nominated for deletion. Your opinions on the matter are welcome; you may participate in the discussion by adding your comments at Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Draft:Project Manas and please be sure to sign your comments with four tildes (~~~~). You are free to edit the content of Draft:Project Manas during the discussion but should not remove the miscellany for deletion template from the top of the page; such a removal will not end the deletion discussion. Thank you. Dlohcierekim (talk) 09:21, 4 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]