User talk:CarinaFlaherty

Dear Lola, Maeve and Josh,

Hello! My Wikipedia article was on abortion in Guatemala. My article has 5 sections: History and General Context, Current Legal Status and Punishment, Effects of Illegalization where I look at Induced Abortions and National Abortion Rates, Controversy, and Guatemalan Law in an International and Regional Context. I would love feedback on these three areas of my paper: 1) Do you get the sense that there is any bias in my article? I know it is a loaded topic but I am trying to be as neutral as possible. 2) Would my history and general context section be more effective if it were split up into smaller sections? 3) In my Current Legal Status and Punishment section, is listing just listing the articles and what they say effective in conveying information or is it a bit too dense? Any way I could make it more effective?

Thanks for the help!

-Carina