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Anand Bakshi Wikipedia Page

Hello DEFCON5

Thank you for your note on my page regarding the edits I made to the Anand Bakshi Wiki page. Since it's my first contribution to Wikipedia, thank you for helping me understand the process better.

There are 2 parts of the edits I made: 1. He served in both the Indian Navy & Indian Army and how he got his break in films - walking 20 kms in bad weather. These were narrated by Anand Bakshi himself on a Doordarshan program. Unfortunately, I don't have the video link to it, but have a copy of an article from a magazine talking about the same. The article was written in 2002 as an obituary for Anand Bakshi. Wiki won't allow me to update a picture of that page here, so please let me know how I can share it with you. Am keen to have this shared with general readers, researchers, etc.

2. My personal opinion of his greatness and collaborations, etc. This is fan talk and I understand needs to be deleted.

Please advise how I can help improve the page as per point 1 above.

Thank you Regards

Dharmendra — Preceding unsigned comment added by DharamMehta1 (talk • contribs) 10:23, 28 February 2021 (UTC)

@DharamMehta1 thankyou for reaching out. First of all regarding the info you want to add, “Anand Bakshi served in both Indian Navy and Army” can be added with a reliable source. “He walked 20 kms...” may be avoided in my opinion as it’s not encyclopaedic. Regarding adding sources. Please see WP:CS and WP:INTREFVE for learning more about how to use citations defcon5 (talk) 12:39, 28 February 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I'm Subhajit_Mondal_105 Sorry for my mistake that I made on Rasmika Mandanna Wikipedia Page. Pardon me. I am new to Wiki so a mistake made by me , Please pardon me and Thanks for findinging my Fault

Thanks, Subhajit Mondal — Preceding unsigned comment added by Subhajit Mondal 105 (talk • contribs) 05:20, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Contact

Where can we contact for wiki lage creation Wikisannc (talk) 06:06, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mahmud-uz-Zafar (March 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Kashmorwiki was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Kichu🐘 ^{Need any help?} 15:41, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Maulana Azad Institute of Dental Science (March 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Kashmorwiki was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Maulana Azad Institute of Dental Science and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Maulana Azad Institute of Dental Science, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Kichu🐘 ^{Need any help?} 03:48, 27 March 2021 (UTC)