User talk:Davisjm4/sandbox
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Formatting Suggestions[edit]
You should really make section headers for your content. This sandbox needs to be in proper Wikipedia format. The bolded stuff need to be changed to headers and subheaders. You should also have your in-text citations there using the references format I showed you. You don't have a references section. The in-text citation you do have are not in proper Wikipedia format. I know it's still rough so just work on those for now. The biggest work is probably the referencing. Ongjf (talk) 15:41, 5 April 2012 (UTC)