User talk:Dowl

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I added some maintenance tags as further suggestions for what can be improved. Thanks--Go Phightins! (talk) 00:49, 9 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

hey there, did my best to write an neutral article. seems like there is too much to change. please just delete the page. thanks! --Dowl (talk) 09:16, 9 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

No problem, you should've seen my first article...it was a wreck. If you really want the page to be deleted, you can blank it, but this page is probably salvageable. Go Phightins! (talk) 10:37, 11 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

hey there, thanks for your feedback! i've re-written the article, and hope that it now fits! what do you think? thanks --Dowl (talk) 17:05, 12 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

i've just shortened the text, and re-wrote most of the phrases! how can we proceed? thanks --Dowl (talk) 15:21, 17 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]