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Week 5/dc4825

I edited two different articles. The first is Media Linguistics and the differ is here. The second is Gene Targeting, and the differ is here. Summary: Gene targeting is a genetic technique that to modify gene to have a better biological role. It can be used for any gene regardless of size. Media linguistic is a linguistic study of language use in the media. It is a modern mass communication through digital network media. I think though this 5 weeks editing an article at Wikipedia is easier for me compared to beginning of the class. Dc4825 (talk) 09:26, 3 August 2022 (UTC)

@Dc4825 Please assign yourself these articles in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:51, 5 August 2022 (UTC)
I updated of assigned articles, please check that. Dc4825 (talk) 04:18, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
Dc4825, Nice edits. Current with Week 5. --- FULBERT (talk) 13:43, 9 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 5/XChen0219

I edited BYD Company, the diff is here . Summary: BYD has become major competitor of Tesla in 2022 after they announced they will go fully EV.

I edited Internet safety, the diff is here. Summary: Hacker often uses phishing as an entry point to attack.

XChen0219 (talk) 09:23, 6 August 2022 (UTC)

XChen0219, There were a couple of typos in your edits, though they have already been fixed. Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 13:52, 9 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 5 / XChen0219

I edited Water conservation, the diff is here. Summary: we should not throw any grabage into toilet, even the tiny one. Because this will affect the recycling of water.

I edited Apex Legends, the diff is here. Summary: I added a brief an Esport event in 2022.

I am more proficient in editing in WiKi. XChen0219 (talk) 11:04, 5 August 2022 (UTC)

XChen0219, Your edit does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third-party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Always use a reliable source, such as an academic journal article or another high-quality reference, as discussed in the assignment and class. Avoid blogs, corporate websites, reviews, press releases, sources where we cannot determine author expertise or bias, and opinion pieces as they generally do not count as reliable sources. Please either assign yourself two different articles and add a credible source that is needed to them or find and cite more reliable sources to the ones you edited. Ping me here when done, and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 20:08, 5 August 2022 (UTC)
Please check the new section that I just uploaded. XChen0219 (talk) 09:24, 6 August 2022 (UTC)
XChen0219, I do not see new edits on those two articles above. Can you share links to the changes you made with more credible and reliable sources? FULBERT (talk) 13:45, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
@XChen0219 I see your new post below. Ignore my comment above. FULBERT (talk) 13:53, 9 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 5/ ParamfD

The articles I edited are Mental Health during the COVID-19 Pandemic. The link to the diff is here. I included information about how the employers were working on improving the morale of the employees.


Another article I edited was Economic impact of the COVID-19 pandemic. The link to the diff is here. I included information on the gender gap section in the article.


ParamfD (talk) 20:27, 6 August 2022 (UTC)

@ParamfD Nice edits. Current with Week 5. --- FULBERT (talk) 13:54, 9 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 5/ Izzywu21

The first article I edited is Huawei, the diff is here. Summary:Correct the right time of collaboration and add Huawei's 5G service introduction. The second article I edited is Unemployment in China, the diff is here. Summary: Correct time for a low-skilled young workers to easily find jobs is 2004-2009. I can found more exact details and edited Wiki very smoothly. Izzywu21 (talk) 21:10, 6 August 2022 (UTC)

@Izzywu21 Nice edits. Current with Week 5. --- FULBERT (talk) 13:56, 9 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 5/ YW5634

The articles I edited are remote work. The link to the diff is here. I added the information of the remote work history.

Another article I edited was leadership style. The link to the diff is here. I added leadership styles are further developed through remote work.

YW5634 (talk) 21:37, 6 August 2022 (UTC)

@YW5634 :Nice edits. Current with Week 5. --- FULBERT (talk) 13:58, 9 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 5/Katrinalin1001

The first article I edited is Food Delivery. The link to the diff is here. I added some details about how Covid-19 has affected the food delivery services.

The second article I edited is Livestreaming. The link to the diff is here. I added some statistics information about the trend of Live streaming commerce in China and America. Katrinalin1001 (talk) 22:10, 6 August 2022 (UTC)

Katrinalin1001, Nice edits on both articles. Current with Week 5. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:00, 9 August 2022 (UTC)

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Week 6 / Cindyhong123

I edited the articles - One-child policy and Population history of China. The diff for one-child policy is here and population history is here. One-child policy discusses history and effects of the policy and criticisms received on that policy. The population history of China provides an overview for Chinese demographic transitions over years. From adding citations to these two articles, I learn how to use keywords to find relevant cited articles. Cindyhong123 (talk) 14:23, 9 August 2022 (UTC)

@Cindyhong123 Nice edits on these two articles. Current with Week 6. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:23, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 6/dc4825

I edited two different articles. The first is Dark diversity and the differ is here. The second is Environmental health, and the differ is here. Summary: Dark diversity is the set of species that are absent from a study site but present in the surrounding region. Environmental health is the aspects of the natural and built environment affecting human health. I think though this 6 weeks editing an article at Wikipedia, I feel confident to add citations to articles. Dc4825 (talk) 09:21, 10 August 2022 (UTC)

@Dc4825 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:24, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 6 / AM12058

I edited two articles with a similar theme, Islands in the Caribbean. I added some information on Aruba's protected area and corrected a minor error in Saint Bart's, please diffs here and here respectively. I am more confident with the process and even used to conversion tool to change km to mi.


~~~ Am12058 (talk) 17:02, 10 August 2022 (UTC)

@Am12058 Nice edits for these two articles. Current with Week 6. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:27, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 7 (Bonus) / AM12058

For the final bonus week, I further explored the editing of islands, such as the Venezuelan Archipelago Los Roques, please see diff here. Lastly, I edited Lemons Sharks based on the research found for the previous article, please see diff here. This exercise has been excellent as Wikipedia has a connotation that it is not a reliable source, but seeing how much time and effort is put into editing and citing, we can see it is a valid source of information that should be used properly.


Thank you.


~~~ Am12058 (talk) 17:20, 10 August 2022 (UTC)

@Am12058 Nice edits on these two final articles, and thanks for the overall feedback on this. I hope you find Wikipedia editing useful and continue with it. Let me know in the future if you ever need any support or help with it. Current with Week 7. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:33, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

Wee6/WL2671

The first article I edited is marine pollution, the diff is here. Summary: Marine pollution can affect the whole earth ecology.

The second article I edited is plastic pollution, the diff is here. Summary: Plastic pollution will increase the flood damage.

I am now highly skilled at editing Wikipedia and can locate relevant pages for citations much more quickly.Wl2671 (talk) 03:31, 11 August 2022 (UTC)

@Wl2671 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:46, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

Week6/Fy2072

I edit two articles this week. the first one is Social media, the diff is here. Summary: Social media is a really important platform for us to chat especially during pandemics. The second one is Baijiu, the difference is here. summary: Wuliangye is a famous liquor brand due to its unique flavor. I am more confident on editing by finding more specific resource. Fy2072 (talk) 08:01, 11 August 2022 (UTC)

Fy2072 (talk) 08:45, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
@Fy2072 Nice edits overall on these two. Current with Week 6. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:48, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

Week7(Bonus)/Fy2072

I edit two articles this week. the first one is CrossFit, the diff is here. Summary: CrossFit has been more and more popular and its content is not fixed. The second one is Self-driving car. The diff is here. Summary: It is important to focus on the safety of self-driving especially try to protect the system from cyberattack.

I edit different articles from different area. I will keep learning from editing! Fy2072 (talk) 10:56, 11 August 2022 (UTC)

@Fy2072 Nice edits on these two final articles, and thanks for the overall feedback on this. I hope you find Wikipedia editing useful and continue! Let me know in the future if you ever need any support or help with it. Current with Week . --- FULBERT (talk) 14:49, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 6/Ninamn7

I edit the article Enterprise resource planning, the diff is here. I also edit the article Carbon offset, the diff is here

Summary: The ESP system is the product of innovation in the manufacturing industry, and the carbon offset as well. Technology is the key driver for industry 4.0.

Ninamn7 (talk) 19:29, 11 August 2022 (UTC)

@Ninamn7 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:52, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

Week7/Ninamn7

I edit Autonomous robot, and the diff is here. I also edit the article Augmented reality, the diff is here. Summary: the technology like autonomous robot and augmented reality will lead the next revolution of the world. Ninamn7 (talk) 19:47, 11 August 2022 (UTC)

@Ninamn7 One of your edits was removed by another editor. OK for now with your edits. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 14:53, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 6/ Sqlo123

I edited Internet security with diff and Internet homicide with diff. Summary 1: A man-in-the-middle attack is one of cyber attack in which data sent between people is steal. Summary 2: Internet homicide may be caused by online datings because of some users suffering from relatedness frustration and seeking for the sex motive in the app. I am more confident with meaning of exploring cyber attack and seek for solutions using new technology. Sqlo123 (talk) 18:17, 12 August 2022 (UTC)

@Sqlo123 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:56, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 7 / Cindyhong123

I edited unintended pregnancy and demographic transition. The diffs are here and here. Unintended pregnancy provides information of women who get pregnant unintentionally while demographic transition explains the demographic transition model and provides historical data across countries and regions. I learned how to detect the gap and fill it with relevant citations. Cindyhong123 (talk) 02:24, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

@Cindyhong123 Nice edits on these two final articles, and thanks for the overall feedback on this. I hope you find Wikipedia editing useful and continue with it. Let me know in the future if you ever need any support or help with it. Current with Week 7. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:04, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 6/ Sss88891

I edited Distance education, the diff is here.Summary1: Distance learning was closely related to individual emotions and personality according to a study. I edited Asynchronous learning, the diff is here. Summary 2: Asynchronous learning during COVID-19 pandemic is quite stressful among students according to a case study. Sss88891 (talk) 03:37, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

@Sss88891 Nice edits. One of them was reverted, though I think what you included would have been fine so you can leave that for now. Current with Week 6. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:07, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 7/ Sss88891

I edited Urbanization in China, the diff is here.Summary1:China's urbanization mode has been transformed and the government focus more on quality improvement. I edited Migration in China. the diff is here. Summary 2: Migration in China can boost long-term economic growth in Chinese cities. Sss88891 (talk) 14:06, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

@Sss88891 Nice edits. Current with Week 7. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:10, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 5/OneGoodNut

The first article I edited is Video game. The link to the diff is here.I added the relationship between video games and teenagers.

The second article I edited is Video game addiction. The link to the diff is here.I added the average age of gamers and the percentage of underage.

~~~~ OneGoodNut (talk) 00:47, 7 August 2022 (UTC)

OneGoodNut, Please assign yourself these articles in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:01, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT,I finished the step of "assign articles". Please check it! OneGoodNut (talk) 22:09, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
@OneGoodNut Nice edits. Current with Week 5. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:24, 14 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 7 /Sqlo123

I edited Internet manipulation with diff. Summary: The Chinese government manipulates Internet by pushing responsibility to individual user for content post on the social media. I edited Internet bot with diff. Summary: One anti-bot technique is labeling accounts with malicious activities to avoid public liking and sharing. I know how to analyze potential issues of Internet with worldview. I learn editing Wikipedia using reliable source. Sqlo123 (talk) 18:41, 12 August 2022 (UTC)

@Sqlo123 This edit is fine, though please assign and edit two articles or a single image. Ping me here when you are finished, and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 14:58, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERTI finish another article related to Internet. Please see modification above, thank you. Sqlo123 (talk) 16:50, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
@Sqlo123 I see one of your edits was removed again, though I think what you had was ok. Complete with Week 7. Keep up the editing in the future! FULBERT (talk) 15:36, 14 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 6/ Izzywu21

I edited Tencent Games, the diff is here.Summary1: Market development of Tencent games in recent years.I edited Made in China, the diff is here. Summary 2:Transformation vision statement. I am now very skilled in editing. Izzywu21 (talk) 21:21, 12 August 2022 (UTC)

@Izzywu21 I do not see your edit on the second article. Can you check and ping me here once clarified? FULBERT (talk) 15:00, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT Sorry, I forgot to log in when I editing the second article. I added a sentence and a citation in and I changed a little bit of of the grammar on my sentence again for you can see where the sentence and citation are because I can't go back. The article is Made in China, and the diff is here. Izzywu21 (talk) 21:32, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
@Izzywu21 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:37, 14 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 6/XChen0219

I edited Mobile security, the diff is here. Summary: Android is the most targeted OS. I edited Privilege escalation, the diff is here. Summary: Compares to the vertical privilege escalation, horizontal requires no upgrading the privilege of accounts. XChen0219 (talk) 08:42, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

@XChen0219 Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:11, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
Done. XChen0219 (talk) 16:07, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
@XChen0219 in the process you removed yourself from the course and tracking. Let me try to fix that, as I cannot otherwise check it. FULBERT (talk) 15:44, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
@XChen0219 I was able to re-add you. Not sure what happened though it should be working now. Current with Week 6's edits. FULBERT (talk) 15:51, 14 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 6 \ Katrinalin1001

The first article I edited is Mobile marketing, the diff is here. Summary: Mobile marketing is now a more popular and essential marketing for companies to attract customers. The second article I edited is Technology acceptance model, the diff is here. Summary: TAM is a useful tool for analyzing customer behavior. Editing Wikipedia is definitely a new experience for me. During this time, I have got more chances to read more information about the topic I'm interested in. Katrinalin1001 (talk) 20:04, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

@Katrinalin1001 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:54, 14 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 6/ YW5634

The first article I edited is Virtual Community, the diff is here. I added a supplemental advantage of virtual communities of practice which has positive effects on job engagement. the second article I edited is Employee Engagement, the diff is here. Employee engagement mediates the relationship between the perceived learning climate and these extra-role behaviors. Engagement can provide a more comprehensive explanation for job satisfaction or job engagement.YW5634 (talk) 21:12, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

@YW5634 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:59, 14 August 2022 (UTC)

Week 6 \ OneGoodNut

The first article I edited is Internet safety. The link to the diff is here.I added a phenomenon that Cyberbullying has become a significant problem for youth.

The second article I edited is Cyberbullying. The link to the diff is here.I added the percentage of preteens and teens were cyberbullied while at school.Cyberbullying is inseparable from the popularity and frequent use of computers and cell phones.@

~~~~ OneGoodNut (talk) 23:16, 13 August 2022 (UTC)

@OneGoodNut Nice edits on these two articles. Current with Week 6. --- FULBERT (talk) 16:01, 14 August 2022 (UTC)

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Christmas market in Red Square in 2017
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