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Week 2/ Assignment 2/ TFMonk19970531

The article I found needs to be updated is Atua(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Atua). The article is rated stub and I found this article needs expansion both in content and structure. Each god can be explained more with research. Besides that, citations could be better developed and need to be more reliable. Basically everything could to be better. --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 14:11, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

TFMonk19970531 Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --FULBERT (talk) 01:25, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

FULBERT Hi Professor I have assigned myself an article. --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 12:46, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

TFMonk19970531 Please remember to indent your replies with one colon "  : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply
FULBERT Got it! --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 06:08, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Where is the link to your article evaluation per the assignment? Please reply to me here with it and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 18:25, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ TFMonk19970531

1. This article a Chinese Basketball Association (CBA) team Shanghai Sharks. Briefly explained what the team did throughout the years. However I found somebody has added some facts that are not true to this article and I decide to delete that. before the edit, the article states that " In 2021, point guard Alex Fisher had 69 points in a regular season game against the Beijing Ducks". In fact Alex Fisher is a football player. The article also mentions that Ben Simmons is belonged to the team, which is not true. Ben Simmons is a NBA player currently playing in Philadelphia 76ERS.

2.Link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shanghai_Sharks

3. I have learned that some people may take advantage of Wikipedia to edit something that is not true, which may make others believe the fact. I help others not see fake information in the article --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 05:39, 29 October 2021 (UTC)

Please fix your reply to Week 2 and then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:30, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
TFMonk19970531 Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:26, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ TFMonk19970531

1. The article I edited is Ben Simmons. It briefly explained Ben's career from his childhood to right now. The content gap I found is that the article does not follow up the conflict between him and Philadelphia 76ers. Due to the conflict with the team Ben refused to play for the team, which made the team to fine him each game. The citation I found report that 76ers has stopped fining Ben, which is not updated in the article.

2. the diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ben_Simmons&type=revision&diff=1052448320&oldid=1052196877

3. This week I have learned about Plagiarism and the importance to keep updating the article constantly so readers can get more information. --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 06:08, 29 October 2021 (UTC)

TFMonk19970531 Please fix your reply to Week 2 and then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:30, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
TFMonk19970531 Nice edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:27, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Tzc0725

Tzc0725 (talk) 22:37, 26 October 2021 (UTC) How to evaluate a Wikipedia article

For evaluating the quality of a Wikipedia article, the text and references used in the article, the talk page of the article, and the history covering page editing are required to be focused.

How to edit a Wikipedia article

For editing a Wikipedia article first step is to look for the edit link which is provided on the right side of every section of the article and then click on the next to the paragraph to revise.

Selected article to evaluate

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Online_shopping

Evaluation of the above-selected article

The text used in the Wikipedia article on Online Shopping is easy to understand and grammatically correct, and a lot of references are used therein which are accessible. The talk page of the article provides spaces for editors to discuss the required changes in the article and also, the article is not edited many times which makes it a good article. Though, the article needs to include some more real-life examples of online shopping from the past two years and how online shopping tendency has grown in the COVID-19 pandemic.

What I Did and What I Learned

I have selected a Wikipedia article on Online Shopping and evaluated it by considering the text and references it used, its talk page, and history showing the number of edits made on this article. There was no such real-life example of online shopping in the selected article and thus, I have added some real-life examples on online shopping from the past two years and how online shopping tendency has grown in the COVID-19 pandemic to the selected article. I have learned about the areas to consider while evaluating a Wikipedia article.

Tzc0725 Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:37, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT Okay. I think this is right.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:28, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
Tzc0725, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:33, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT Okay. I've just done it.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:03, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Tzc0725 Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week, including the required training, and then ping me here. Be sure to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Ping me here and sign it when you are done. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:29, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
FULBERTOkay. Just done it.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:03, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Tzc0725, Week 2 is ok. Current. FULBERT (talk) 18:30, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ Tzc0725

Tzc0725 (talk) 22:41, 26 October 2021 (UTC) The Finalised Topic: 

Consumer Behavior

Copyedit the selected article

In order to copyedit an article, the first step is to fix the punctuations and remove any kind of typo in the article. After that, the article needs to be scanned for finding out the errors of the ways by which the article needs to be improved.

What I Did and What I Learned

The Wikipedia article I have selected for copyediting is on Consumer behavior https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Consumer_behaviour). . The previous Wikipedia article is on Online Shopping and the current one is on Consumer Behaviour, both rely on each other as online shopping is a modern behavior of consumers related to shop things they need. Further, the difference between the previous week's version and the current one is that the previous version includes an evaluation of a Wikipedia article and the current one covers copyediting of a Wikipedia article. From this week, I have learned about the way to copyedit a Wikipedia article.

Link to the diff:

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Consumer_behaviour&diff=prev&oldid=1052751826 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tzc0725 (talk • contribs) 22:10, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Link to the talk page:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Consumer_behaviour#Consumer_Influence_in_Society

68.132.244.48 (talk) 00:23, 28 October 2021 (UTC)

Tzc0725 Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:37, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT Okay. I think this is right.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:28, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
Tzc0725, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:33, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT Okay. I've just done it.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:03, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Tzc0725 Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week, including the required training, and then ping me here. Be sure to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Ping me here and sign it when you are done. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:30, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
FULBERTOkay. Just done it.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:03, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Tzc0725, Week 3 is now current. --FULBERT (talk) 18:31, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Tzc0725

Gap identification

The key gap between the article on Online Shopping, and the article on Consumer Behaviour is that there is no such clear discussion on the impact of consumer behavior on online shopping in the article on Online Shopping, whereas the article on Consumer Behaviour includes the behaviors of consumers that influence online shopping. The advantages and disadvantages of online purchase are provided in the article on Online Shopping, but the advantages and disadvantages of consumer behavior are not provided in the article on Consumer Behaviour.

Plagiarism training

Plagiarism is to present someone else's ideas or work as your own, without or with his/her consent, by using or incorporating such work or ideas into personal work without providing full acknowledgment (Oxford Students, 2021). It is considered unethical because it is a form of theft.

Citation of article

The article to edit here is on Healthcare Industry. Citation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Healthcare_industry.

The article to cite is here: https://www.cms.gov/Research-Statistics-Data-and-Systems/Statistics-Trends-and-Reports/NationalHealthExpendData/NationalHealthAccountsHistorical

What I Did and What I Learned

Summary of the cited article:

The Healthcare industry is the integration and aggregation of different economic sectors within a system that delivers products and services for treating patients by different types of care. This industry is contributing around 10% to the most developed nation’s GDP and is the largest and fastest-growing industry in the world. There are several areas of the healthcare industry such as hospital activities, dental and medical practice activities, and other activities related to human health. The healthcare professionals and providers who are engaged in providing preventive, curative, rehabilitative, palliative, and promotional care services systematically way to individuals, families, or communities. This industry delivers primary care, secondary care, and healthcare services at tertiary levels. Beveridge model, Bismarck model, National health insurance model, and Out-of-pocket model are the models that relate to the healthcare industry. Healthcare spending in the U.S. grew 4.6 percent in 2019, reaching $3.8 trillion or $11,582 per person. As a share of the nation's Gross Domestic Product, health spending accounted for 17.7 percent.

Link to the sandbox page:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tzc0725/Healthcare_industry

Link to the diff of article citation added

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Healthcare_industry&diff=prev&oldid=1052405609

Things I have learned

From this week, I have learned about the concept of Plagiarism and how consumers' online shopping behaviors impact the healthcare industries of developing nations. Tzc0725 (talk) 00:28, 29 October 2021 (UTC)

Tzc0725, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:33, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT Okay. I've just done it. Tzc0725 (talk) 23:04, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Tzc0725 Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week, including the required training, and then ping me here. Be sure to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Ping me here and sign it when you are done. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:30, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
FULBERTOkay. Just done it.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:04, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Tzc0725, This is fine now. Seems interesting how some edits done right after yours were then reverted back to your edit itself. Nice job! FULBERT (talk) 18:34, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 1 / First Post/ Wikisun1952

Hi, this is Jieni. It is my pleasure to meet you guys. This is my first time editing Wikipedia. Wikisun1952 (talk) 05:45, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

Wikisun1952, Welcome to Wikipedia! Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week (including the training) and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply.
Hi Professor, I have finished all the assignments for week one. Thank you. User:FULBERT Wikisun1952 (talk) 01:06, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Wikisun1952 Nicely done. Current with Week 1. --FULBERT (talk) 18:36, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2 / Assignment 2 / Wikisun1952

Hello, I hope you are all doing well, this is Jieni Zha's report for the week 2 assignment. This article I assigned to myself is related to the cosmetic industry. It's a class C level article so there is plenty of room for improvement. For this article, I found that it has a daily average of 127 views. There are some issues of the content are lack of evidence and support. This article studies the business model and sales of cosmetics in many countries, but it is not comprehensive. The analysis of the Chinese market and the Japanese market is not comprehensive. This paper should analyze the sales and product quality of cosmetics in these countries.

This is the link to my article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cosmetic_industry

This is the link to my evaluation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wikisun1952/Evaluate_an_ArticleWikisun1952 (talk) 23:50, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Wikisun1952, Nicely done. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 18:37, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3 / Assignment 3 / Wikisun1952

Hello, this is Jieni Zha's third assignment

1. My copyedited article is "Broadcasting". This is the link to my assigned article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Broadcasting

2: I have added one paragraph regarding the history of the opium war in order to make the article looks more detailed. this is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Broadcasting&type=revision&diff=1052767681&oldid=1049623188

3: The reason why I do this is that I like to watch live broadcasts when I rest. I have a lot of knowledge about live broadcasts. I have a deep research on the live broadcast content, mode, and platform. After reading this article, I think some points are not enough, so I added some content to the article.

4: The link for the article "Broadcasting" https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wikisun1952/Broadcasting/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliographyWikisun1952 (talk) 00:24, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Wikisun1952, This is ok for now, though next time you add content please be sure to cite a source for it. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 18:37, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4 / Assignment 4 / Wikisun1952

Hello, this is Jieni Zha.

1. The article I assigned is "E-commerce". This article does not give a comprehensive introduction to the types of e-commerce, so I added content to the article. It’s located under the section of “E-commerce businesses may also employ some or all of the following”.

2. Here is the line to the differences I made: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=E-commerce&type=revision&diff=1052772726&oldid=1052303451 The link to the bibliography is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wikisun1952/E-commerce/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography

3. From this assignment, I learned how to add citations to Wikipedia and how to correctly find out the reference used in the article. I also learned how to generate citations in WikipediaWikisun1952 (talk) 00:56, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Wikisun1952, This is also ok for now, though I would have ordinarily reverted it as not being a high enough quality credible source. OK for now, however. Week 4 is done. FULBERT (talk) 18:39, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/Assignment 3/ Katxzhang

1. The link of the article I copyedited is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_influence_bias

2. The link to the comparison between old and new of the article is:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Social_influence_bias&type=revision&diff=1052812403&oldid=952213718

3. I have learned a lot in this week's work, one of them is that precise punctuation contributes to the composition of a well-written article, it is a factor that can be easily neglected by writers; The accuracy of punctuation can make sure viewers receive information efficiently. I have also learned that prepositions in phrases are able to alter the interpretation of the phrase, therefore, writers should be cautious with their wording. Katxzhang (talk) 09:41, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:18, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT, Hi Professor, I have just assigned this article, thanks for the heads up!Katxzhang (talk) 18:45, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Katxzhang, Great! Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 18:49, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/Assignment 4/Katxzhang

1. The article citation I added is a brief summary of BuzzFeed's operating model, the way it makes a profit and keeps on growing its business scale.

2. The link of comparison is: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=BuzzFeed&diff=prev&oldid=1052850965

3. During the process, I learned that it is challenging to write with precision while trying to be concise, therefore, massive research in regard to the topic is of vital importance in order to accumulate more insight that eventually contributes to shaping our words effectively. Katxzhang (talk) 13:33, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Katxzhang, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:18, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT, Hi Professor, I have just assigned this article, thanks for the heads up!Katxzhang (talk) 18:45, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Katxzhang, Nice edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:49, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/Katxzhang/Assignment 2

Hello this is Katherine,

1. The article I assigned is "Taiyuan", the link is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Taiyuan. 2. I think this article can be improved by including more detailed information on "Food" section as well as a comprehensive description of the city's present development. 3. The link of my evaluation is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Katxzhang/Evaluate_an_Article. Katxzhang (talk) 05:26, 31 October 2021 (UTC)Katxzhang

Katxzhang, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:18, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT Hi Professor, I have just assigned the article, thanks for the heads up!Katxzhang (talk) 18:42, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Katxzhang, Fine. Now current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 18:50, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

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Week 1/ Assignment 1/ Crazytoppp

Hello everyone, this is Mengfei Han, It is the first time I edit in Wikipidia. I am glad to talk with everyone here!Crazytoppp (talk) 21:55, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Crazytoppp Welcome to Wikipedia! Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. Also, please revise the heading as this should be for assignment one. -- FULBERT (talk) 01:33, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Crazytoppp

1. The article I evaluated is "Video game addiction". The answer to this article is rigorous and neutral, and there is no biased toward a particular position. The article’s explanation of the topic is very accurate and clear. At the same time, a large amount of academic research is used to prove the credibility. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Crazytoppp/Evaluate_an_Article#Evaluate_the_article 3. In the process of evaluating this article, I learned how to analyze the credibility of the article and how to add citations in wikipedia. ---Crazytoppp (talk) 22:42, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Crazytoppp, Please fix what I asked you to fix for Week 1 and then I will review this. Ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 22:56, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3 / Baezoey

1. The article I worked on: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Doinb

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Doinb&diff=1052817209&oldid=1050478402

3.I learned that not everything on Wikipedia is correct. We should always be critical of what we acquire from Wikipedia, whether as an editor or receivers. The magical power of editing those articles is that I can see my adjustments on the website right after publishing changes.Baezoey (talk) 07:44, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Baezoey, This is ok for now, though next time be sure to add a citation to the article to support your claim. FULBERT (talk) 17:55, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT, Hi Professor. Is that mean I am current for this week?
Baezoey Yes, current for Week 3. --FULBERT (talk) 22:58, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week2 / Assignment 2/yf2196

Hope you all are doing well this week. This is YiFan Feng assignment for week 2. This should be my homework for the second week. I don't know why I couldn't find my homework for the previous two times. This is the article I found about brunch. It says British brunch is around eleven o 'clock, and I don't think there's a standard time for brunch.

This assignment is based on the evaluation of Wikipedia, and I have learned a lot in the process of finding and evaluating Wikipedia. I hope I can continue to learn about Wikipedia. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Brunch&action=edit&section=3

Yifannn Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:35, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

What is using four ～～～～ for tilde？ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yifannn (talk • contribs) 06:12, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Yifannn When you use ~~~~ at the end of your post it automatically signs your posts. Please use this as a reply and see / edit your other assignments for Weeks 1-3 as they are not yet complete. Please make sure to also assign yourself your articles, and have this along with Week 4 complete by tomorrow. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:52, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

I have assigned my own article.... 

Yifannn (talk) 19:36, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Yifannn You must assign your own articles in the Wiki Education dashboard, at the top of [dashboard home page]. Please do this and then ping me here and I will review. --FULBERT (talk) 23:04, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week3 / Assignment 3/yf2196

Yifannn (talk) 06:41, 27 October 2021 (UTC) YiFan Feng

The last article was about "brunch" because it said that the English brunch was around eleven o'clock. I think there is no standard time for brunch. Because I should add a time period for brunch in this Wikipedia.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Brunch&action=edit&section=3


This time I upgraded according to the type I selected last time, and the Wikipedia article I chose for editing is this article about "time" content. It's because the previous Knowledge Encyclopedia article was about the time period of brunch, and the current article is the concept of time. What time is the morning defined by people? When is it early in the morning? But there seems to be no answer or standard information on this topic, and I am just participating and guessing. I didn't know about the evaluation of Wikipedia articles before in my impression, nor did I participate in the discussion. This extra points project has allowed me to learn a lot of things I haven't discovered before, and I hope I can learn more later.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Morning&action=edit&section=3

Yifannn Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. Some of the things you did were also not required. I will then take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 00:03, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
I tink i finished all 4 part Yifannn (talk) 19:37, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Yifannn You must assign your own articles in the Wiki Education dashboard, at the top of [dashboard home page]. Please do this and then ping me here and I will review. --FULBERT (talk) 23:05, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Jason Zhou Week 1/Assignment 1/ Zhouyu2428

Hi this is my first wikipedia editing --Zhouyu2428 (talk) 19:41, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Zhouyu2428, Welcome to Wikipedia, and I hope you find it an interesting and engaging experience! FULBERT (talk) 23:08, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Jason Zhou Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Zhouyu2428

1. For week 2 assignment, I evaluated an article on the topic of ecosystem. What I have found is that although the organization of the article is concise and accurate and the sources are all reliable, there is a lack of information on this article because it is very short and not many concurrent examples and concepts are on it. 2. Link to the evaluated article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business_ecosystem#See_also 3. I have learned how to evaluate a wikipedia article through this process. The evaluation should be thorough and detailed. --Zhouyu2428 (talk) 20:31, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Zhouyu2428, Please review the training for Week 2, as it will have you creating a new page within your sandbox for this evaluation. Please do that through the training itself and then ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 23:09, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/Assignment 2/KwokHy98

1. This article is outdated and more evidence and explanation is needed. 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KwokHy98/Evaluate_an_Article 3. In week 2, I learned what makes an article good. It should have a good structure, a neutral tone, up-to-date content, and reliable references. KwokHy98 (talk) 19:51, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

KwokHy98, A bit short, but it is good enough for now. Week 2 is current. FULBERT (talk) 23:11, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ KwokHy98

1. Link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Joey_Yung 2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Joey_Yung&type=revision&diff=1052914278&oldid=1052541733 3. In assignment 3 I learn that we need to be careful of grammar and word using when we editing an article in Wikipedia. We should make the article clear and easy to read. KwokHy98 (talk) 20:36, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

KwokHy98, Nice copyediting. Week 3 is current. FULBERT (talk) 23:11, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ KwokHy98

1. Because there is no information about the concert in 2019 by Joey Yung, I added it. 2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Joey_Yung&type=revision&diff=1052934568&oldid=1052914278 3. I learned that the information we edit need to be authoritative. The references we use should be reliable sources like professional journals. KwokHy98 (talk) 23:16, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

KwokHy98, Nice edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 23:36, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

This week's article for improvement (week 44, 2021)

Isabel Adrian is a Swedish television personality, producer, author and model. Pictured is Adrian in 2013.
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Week 2 / Assignment 2 / RaymondZqiu

Hi, this is Raymond and it's my second post. 1. My article is "AI for food". I found its content can be richer. For example, adding more details related to the key events of the "AI for food" platform. 2. Here is my evaluation link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RaymondZqiu/Evaluate_an_Article 3. During the process, I have learned what AI practitioners did to improve AI technology. Besides, I realized how to evaluate an article with proper criteria.--RaymondZqiu (talk) 23:42, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

RaymondZqiu, This is fine. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 20:46, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/assignment 3/Huilin826

The article I found related to music history because I am so interested in any type of music, such as pop, rock, and jazz. Different types of music bring specific feelings to audiences. This is my first time editing it, it is so hard for me. I must find some mistakes in the grammar and pronunciation. There is a link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Music_history

Huilin826 Please remove the extra information at the end of your signature (you do not have to repeat it) and then ping me here and I will review. Please first do Week 1. Ping me when done. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:41, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT Okay. I think this is right.Huilin826 (talk) 23:24, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
Huilin826, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:27, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT Okay. I think this is right.Huilin826 (talk) 23:11, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Huilin826, Please remember to indent one more than the current indent when replying. Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --FULBERT (talk) 23:15, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Music_history&type=revision&diff=1052937900&oldid=1052877954Huilin826 (talk) 23:51, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Huilin826, What you edited was already reverted by another editor, though I think it met the criteria for this assignment. Current for Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 20:52, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Assignment 4/Huilin826

The article I found related to the Chinese New Year because I am so happy to know more detailed information about the Chinese New Year, It is a traditional festival in China. People will use different approaches to celebrate it, such as Chun Lian, and Ya Sui Qian. This is a link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_New_Year This is a diff link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Chinese_New_Year&type=revision&diff=1052941829&oldid=1052620547 There is no more issue cause that describes the history of the Chinese New Year. Huilin826 (talk) 00:17, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

Huilin826, This assignment was primarily about adding a citation. Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 20:54, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ Crazytoppp

1. The article I edited Tencent, and I found the markt valuation of Tencent in 2021 is missing. And I found the news from Bloomberg. Artcle link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tencent 2. Link to Diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tencent&diff=1052940913&oldid=1052866512 3. During this week process, I learned that everyone can edit on Wikipedia, so the accuracy of article content is very important. --- Crazytoppp (talk) 00:18, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

Crazytoppp, This is fine for this assignment. Current for Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 20:55, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Crazytoppp

1. The article I edited is video addiction in China, and I found that the new regulation issued in August 2021 is missing in the Anti-addiction measures. I used the source from New York Times report.Link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Video_game_addiction_in_China 2. Link to Diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Video_game_addiction_in_China&diff=1052932726&oldid=1046599161 3. During this week process, I learned that inserting citations in the text is very important to the accuracy of the article.---Crazytoppp (talk) 00:19, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

Crazytoppp, Nice edit to this article. Current for Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 20:57, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3 / Cloi929

1.my copyedited article is: Steinhardt, N. (2019). Chinese architecture : A history. Princeton University Press. https://www.proquest.com/docview/2193647558/$N?accountid=12768&forcedol=true&forcedol=true[1] 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Chinese_architecture&diff=1052774604&oldid=1052686089 3.At first I was nervous, I was afraid that I would make some mistakes, like grammatical errors. But I am happy when I finished. For me, I like ancient Chinese architecture very much. Let more people to have a deeper understanding of ancient Chinese architecture. I think it's great!Cloi929 (talk) 06:41, 28 October 2021 (UTC)

Cloi929, This source is good though it points to a database. Can you fix it so it points to the book's ISBN? This involves only editing that one source you inserted. Ping me here when you are finished and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 15:40, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Hi professor I already make the change, please check! Thank you.--Cloi929 (talk) 23:59, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Cloi929, This is now fine. Current for Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 20:59, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

/* Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Cloi929 */

1.This book is a biography of Liang Sicheng's contribution to the preservation and restoration of ancient Chinese architecture. At the same time, it has made extraordinary achievements in the research and development of ancient architecture 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Dougong&diff=1052937224&oldid=1043398010 3.I found that the old Wikipedia didn't mention the Tang and Song dynasties. And I add it. I feel like do Wikipedia is more interesting than I thought. Other people know more because of you!--Cloi929 (talk) 23:52, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Cloi929, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 20:59, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/ Assignment 2 / Sleep by 11

This week I learned how to evaluate an article and some tools for editing Wikipedia text, including how to use the whole interface, etc. I have discovered that Wikipedia is a powerful tool that allows us to edit the encyclopedia objectively. The system has set up is very good and therefore gives us, the editors, a good sense of independence and objectivity.Sleep by 11 (talk) 15:58, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11 Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:50, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
Sleep by 11, This is the last opportunity to fix this for this week's assignment. FULBERT (talk) 17:50, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Done.Sleep by 11 (talk) 00:37, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
Sleep by 11, Done. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 21:01, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3 / Sleep by 11

This week I learned how to assign an article while looking up references online. I have a better understanding of this editing system, including how to edit an encyclopedia and how to build one. The whole process is as rigorous as writing an academic paper.Sleep by 11 (talk) 16:08, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 23:50, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
Done.Sleep by 11 (talk) 00:43, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
Sleep by 11, Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 21:02, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 4/ Assignment 4 / Sleep by 11

I am writing the word of this company Tencent, and the citation I added is the address of this company's official website.

With this link below, you can see my writing history, as well as the individual versions. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Sleep_by_11/Tencent&action=history

This week I learned how to peer review someone else's article, which requires a rigorous and detailed process to evaluate all aspects. In addition to this, I also learned how to write my own words, such as how to post my own text, how to edit content inside the sandbox, and how to add citations.I deeply understood that the process of writing Wikipedia is very rigorous and how to write academic articles with the same rigor. It is also important to be responsible for every single word you write.Sleep by 11 (talk) 01:22, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Sleep by 11, You did something that appeared more like writing a new article rather than editing the article as was the assignment. Please review the assignment and add a citation to the article you chose exactly as per the assignment. Whatever you actually did was deleted, per an editor's comment on your Talk page. Ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 17:49, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
All done.Sleep by 11 (talk) 00:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
Sleep by 11, Where is the link to the new article you added a citation to, per the assignment? FULBERT (talk) 21:03, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 3 / Assignment 3 / RaymondZqiu

Hi, this is Raymond and it's my third post. 1. Link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Artificial_intelligence 2. Link to diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Artificial_intelligence&type=revision&diff=1052958101&oldid=1052957820 3. After the process, I realize the importance to correct the grammar and make the text easy to read.--RaymondZqiu (talk) 02:26, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

RaymondZqiu, This is fine, and I agree with you! Week 3 is current. FULBERT (talk) 21:05, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

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Week 4/ Add a Citation to an Article/ SABA90S

Hi everyone, this is Saba. I have been working on the below article: Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on tourism. And I have added a citation to the article about the Covid-19 pandemic impacts on the job market. Please see the below link of the diff. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Impact_of_the_COVID-19_pandemic_on_tourism&diff=1053239691&oldid=1053091099. --SABA90S (talk) 19:08, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

SABA90S, The statement is a bit choppy in some places, but good enough for now for another editor to improve upon. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 23:01, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 2 / Assignment 2 / EricaLiu1260

Hello folks,

Hope you all are well this week. This is Erica Liu’s assignment for week 2. The article I assigned is ‘tasting menu’. My topic is about changing the menu and it is related. However, it is a Class S-level article and has an average of 52 views every day. In my opinion, there are some places needed improvement. For example, the effect of the tasting menu and the famous example of the tasting menu can be added in this article.

I would say this article is still helpful for my study and the tasting menu can be used in my real-world practice. This is the link to the article:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tasting_menuEricaLiu1260 (talk) 23:27, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

EricaLiu1260, Please complete the article evaluation per the instructions and steps in the Evaluate Wikipedia training assignment and then ping me here when it is done. You will then have a link to your evaluation on your own sandbox page. FULBERT (talk) 01:31, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
EricaLiu1260, This has still not been complete. Please finish before the end of the day today. FULBERT (talk) 18:05, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Hi, professor，I guess there is something wrong with my wiki, because I just posted week2 twice, and i posted my evaluation site in other section, here is the link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:EricaLiu1260/Evaluate_an_Article Hope this assignment looks good, thank you so muchEricaLiu1260 (talk) 17:45, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
EricaLiu1260, This is fine now. Current with Week 2. --FULBERT (talk) 23:05, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 2 / Assignment 2 / EricaLiu1260

Hello folks, Hope you all are well this week. This is Erica Liu’s assignment for week 2. The article I assigned is ‘tasting menu’. My topic is about changing the menu and it is related. However, it is a Class S-level article and has an average of 52 views every day. In my opinion, there are some places needed improvement. For example, the effect of the tasting menu and the famous example of the tasting menu can be added in this article. I would say this article is still helpful for my study and the tasting menu can be used in my real-world practice. This is the link of evaluation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:EricaLiu1260/Evaluate_an_Article This is the link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tasting_menu EricaLiu1260 (talk) 17:26, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

EricaLiu1260 (talk · contribs) Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:09, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Hello, professor! I have already corrected it, thank you so much! EricaLiu1260 (talk) 17:41, 1 November 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by EricaLiu1260 (talk • contribs) 17:39, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
EricaLiu1260, Week 2 is complete. --FULBERT (talk) 23:06, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 2/ Second Post / Herry3999

1.This is an article about MACD indicators in stocks. This paper introduces the mathematical interpretation and transaction application of MACD. I put forward some areas for improvement. 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Herry3999/Evaluate_an_Article?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_evaluate_article 3.In this process, I learned that writing an article may have to consider a lot of things, especially explaining the type of article. Because you don't know your readers, you'd better do everything so that readers don't have questions when reading. Herry3999 (talk) 08:16, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Herry3999, Where is your first post? Please enter that as we cannot skip weeks. Then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:20, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Hi, I have already added my first post as the name of week1/Assignment 1/hl3999. Herry3999 (talk) 16:50, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Herry3999, I somehow cannot locate it; can you please link to it? FULBERT (talk) 22:34, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Herry3999, Week 1 is now current, though you have not completed any of the required training. Please complete that and then ping me here and I will review your work. FULBERT (talk) 18:15, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Hi Professor, I have finished all the training. User:FULBERT Thank you. Herry3999 (talk) 04:57, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
Herry3999, Great. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 23:12, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ Herry3999

1. My copyedited article is the "Hui Ka Yan".this is the link to my assigned article:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Hui_Ka_Yan&editintro=Template%3ABLP_editintro#Career 2. I added a record of his personal life. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Hui_Ka_Yan&type=revision&diff=1052636906&oldid=1049541217 3. In this process, I experienced the process of modifying Wikipedia by querying information for the first time. This made me feel very interesting, but also gave me a deeper understanding of Hui Ka Yan. Herry3999 (talk) 08:47, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Herry3999, Where is your first post? Please enter that as we cannot skip weeks. Also, please adjust your username in the heading you created here to include your Wikipedia user name and not the one you have listed here. Then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:22, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Herry3999, Week 1 is now current, though you have not completed any of the required training. Please complete that and then ping me here and I will review your work. FULBERT (talk) 18:15, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Hi Professor, I have finished all the training. Thank you. User:FULBERTHerry3999 (talk) 04:58, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
Herry3999, I saw this edit was reverted and agree with it. Make sure you use the same level of credible and reliable sources as we use in class. FULBERT (talk) 23:13, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Week4 / assignment 4/ Herry3999

1. I chose the article about Wang Jianlin this week. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wang_Jianlin&editintro=Template%3ABLP_editintro#Early_life_and_career 2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wang_Jianlin&type=revision&diff=1052795506&oldid=1041607938

3. In this process, I learned that every example should be proved accordingly. This can reflect the integrity and preciseness of the article. Herry3999 (talk) 09:13, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Herry3999, Where is your first post? Please enter that as we cannot skip weeks. Also, please adjust your username in the heading you created here to include your Wikipedia user name and not the one you have listed here. Finally, Week 4 has to be a different article from Week 3 per the assignment, so please assign yourself another article, edit it, and then post that assignment. Then ping me and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:23, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
I have chosen a new article. Herry3999 (talk) 03:31, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Herry3999, Week 1 is now current, though you have not completed any of the required training. Please complete that and then ping me here and I will review your work. FULBERT (talk) 18:15, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Hi Professor, I have finished all the training. Thank you. User:FULBERTHerry3999 (talk) 04:59, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
Herry3999, Use credible and reliable sources. This was already reverted, and I agree with that outcome. Next time I will ask you to use better sources. FULBERT (talk) 23:14, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
  1. ^ . ISBN 9780691169989. {{cite book}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)
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