User talk:Faulhnhm

This user is a student editor in University_of_Cincinnati_/English_2089_Intermediate_Composition__(Fall_) .

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Hello, Faulhnhm, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:26, 2 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review[edit]

I think your changes are looking good so far! You do a great job of describing in detail how FIP can be transmitted between cats. Your new sections sound good and informed.

One thing that you could possibly consider adding/changing is maybe give more insight as to why the FIP vaccine is ineffective. This could potentially leave people confused. (Oh, and you have a typo here "Later, she. the healthy cat".)

I think it is really important that you're clearing up confusion on FIP. I know you're passionate about it and want to keep people informed. The most important thing you could do is keep people accurately informed on this disease.

Good luck on the rest of your edits and hopefully that talk page doesn't eat you alive after you publish!! :) Guthdt (talk) 13:41, 31 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]