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Your submission at Articles for creation: Indoor Advertising (April 11)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Hoary was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Unfortunately, this is riddled with problems. I'll look at just a single sentence. We are told: Indoor advertising ^[4] gets the brands closer to their targeted audience and is an affordable type of advertising suitable both for large and small businesses. What is the meaning of "[getting] a brand closer to" some group of people? (Increasing their desire to buy products so branded, perhaps?) "Affordable" by which standard(s)? Who says it's suitable both for large and small businesses? References are there to reference the assertions that they follow; "indoor advertising" is not an assertion. The word "indoor" appears within the title of the cited article, but nowhere in its text. The cited article is a blog entry in a company's website, and presumably written for the benefit of that company; how is it a reliable source?

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Hoary (talk) 01:34, 11 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Indoor Advertising (April 11)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Greenman were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Submission is far from being approved. Source 1 is a Google search. Source 3, 4 and 5 are WP:CIRCULAR, and so on. Numerous unsourced statements. WP:External links should be removed. See also WP:COI.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Greenman (talk) 21:18, 11 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Indoor Advertising (April 22)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This appears to be a duplicate of another submission, Advertising, which is also waiting to be reviewed. To save time we will consider the other submission and not this one.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Theroadislong (talk) 09:39, 22 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback about Draft:Indoor Advertising[edit]

Hi Fraredemptor,

I did glance at your draft and comment on it, but I didn't look at it thoroughly - it is still in the queue for someone else to give it a full review. That said, it looks like reviewers (and other people looking at the draft) have three main concerns:

The tone of this draft reads more like a marketing company trying to promote indoor advertising than a formal encyclopedia article explaining what indoor advertising is.
Why does this topic deserve its own article, rather than just being a section in the article advertising?
The best sources for an article are usually the ones that aren't written by people closely connected to the topic - in this case, the best sources would be ones not written by advertising companies. (As a side note, I don't know quite what you mean by "I didn't add new sources because there aren't any.")

One last question: did you write all of the text and take all of the pictures in this draft, or are any of them copied from somewhere else?

I hope this is of some help. LittlePuppers (talk) 04:59, 6 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, thank you for your reply. I was thinking of creating this Indoor advertising page for non-commercial purposes, as I am not in any way involved in marketing business. Why I do believe it deserves a Wikipedia page of its own is that indoor advertising - even is included under the big advertising umbrella - is specialized in advertising exclusively in closed spaces. Do you think that I should rather write it as a section of Advertising page? And yes, I wrote the whole text and took all the pictures by myself (from malls and other commercial public spaces). None are not copied from anywhere. Thx. Fraredemptor (talk) 10:12, 7 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: All for ads (November 8)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Vanderwaalforces was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Vanderwaalforces (talk) 12:59, 8 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. I noticed that you dismissed my draft article a few seconds after I posted it. Did you had time to read it at least? Tell me please, what is missing? I have in my article independent sources and official sources. Also, and this is very important, it is an article about a company. It may not be Coca Cola or Siemens, but it is a company. So, what is the problem with my article? Thank you. Fraredemptor (talk) 13:07, 8 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Look, here is the Wikipedia page of a newspaper, ZF.ro https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ziarul_Financiar. Is this an indepth stuff? Why this page is already approved but mine is not? Thank you. Fraredemptor (talk) 13:15, 8 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:All for ads has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:All for ads. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 13:15, 8 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Indoor Advertising[edit]

Hello, Fraredemptor. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Indoor Advertising".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. ✗plicit 00:26, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]