User talk:GWeinert2/sandbox

Delete this sandbox if you can to avoid confusion w the peer feedback. thanks! AMcClanan (talk) 20:04, 27 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It looks like the other sandbox is the one that should be deleted at this point--thanks. Here are a few tips as you revise:

take a look at other top-rated Wikipedia entries for tone. Generally they are strictly factual, so subjective statements such as

are an unknown mystery in the art world might be reconsidered

the target length is 300-500 words, and body of the draft currently is 191 words. That said, I'm optimistic you can easily expand when you do more research beyond just the two items listed (why not use William Tronzo's book on the Via Latina catacombs for instance?)
the general 4th cent. date might be revised a little as you do more research, seems important for the discussion about the Christian versus Christian subject matter
use the citation tool in Wikipedia so that you can reference the journal article with enough info so that the reader knows what you're linking to (author, title, all that good stuff).

Please touch base if you have any questions, I'm happy to help!

AMcClanan (talk) 19:38, 29 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

From Prof McClanan, 12/3[edit]

I'm just checking in on your entry, etc. Please let me know if your U2: Editing a Wikipedia entry is posted somewhere and I'm not seeing it, too. thanks, ALMcAMcClanan (talk) 01:46, 4 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]