User talk:Gmehmood

Michael Zansky[edit]

Please, read up on Wiki rules, and the manual of style. Wikipedia has certain standards that must be adhered to. Per WP:GOODFAITH I assume that that you are young and have no wiki-experience.--Galassi (talk) 21:02, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Glassi. Yes infact I am very new to this. I am just trying to get rid of the error on the top of the page. Can

you give me advice please? this is the error I am trying to get rid of. Can you help me or give me advice please? "This article may need to be rewritten entirely to comply with Wikipedia's quality standards. You can help. The discussion page may contain suggestions." (February 2011)

It is a no-brainer. The atricle has to be written in a dry encyclopedic tone, without waxing or peacock words. It cannot sound like an ad or a resume. The lede should be simple, and reviews shouldn't be in it.--Galassi (talk) 23:58, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Why is it that to me it sounds good. What do you see in this article that is wrong and causing these errors?

I know there was a duplicate line. I took that out and get an error =(

It sounds like a cheesy advertisement. The article has to be factual and dry to be trustworthy. All opinions have to be attributable and attributed to specific authoritative individuals and publications, and DOCUMENTED. It is not a difficult thing, look at any other notable artist's article, and copy the format. There is no question whether MZ is notable, but the article has to be de-cheese'd. Look at Phillip Guston for an example.--Galassi (talk) 22:24, 22 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thank You Galassi. Ill do that and make some correction in the lead in. Please let me know if it works. If not feel free to undo it.

Hi Galassi. Please take a look at the page. Is the intro better? --Gmehmood