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Yahya Ekhou moved to draftspace[edit]

Thanks for your contributions to Yahya Ekhou. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it has no sources. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. Significa liberdade (she/her) (talk) 00:02, 27 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yahya Ekhou (January 27)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Cabrils was:
This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
Well done on creating the draft, and it may potentially meet the relevant requirements (including WP:GNG, WP:ANYBIO, WP:AUTHOR) but presently it is not clear that it does.

As other reviewers have noted, Wikipedia's basic requirement for entry is that the subject is notable. Essentially subjects are presumed notable if they have received significant coverage in multiple published secondary sources that are reliable, intellectually independent of each other, and independent of the subject. To properly create such a draft page, please see the articles ‘Your First Article’, ‘Referencing for Beginners’ and ‘Easier Referencing for Beginners’. Please note that some of the references are not from sources that are considered reliable and should be removed (including blogs, company websites, Twitter, YouTube). Please note that the references are not formatted correctly (see Introduction to referencing with VisualEditor and Wikipedia’s Manual of Style for help). Additionally, the draft tends to read too much like a CV, which Wikipedia is not. I think this is probably a case of WP:TOOSOON. Also, if you have any connection to the subject, including being paid, you have a conflict of interest that you must declare on your Talk page (to see instructions on how to do this please click the link). Please familiarise yourself with these pages before amending the draft. If you feel you can meet these requirements, then please make the necessary amendments before resubmitting the page. It would help our volunteer reviewers by identifying, on the draft's talk page, the WP:THREE best sources that establish notability of the subject. It would also be helpful if you could please identify with specificity, exactly which criteria you believe the page meets (eg "I think the page now meets WP:ANYBIO criteria #3, because XXXXX").

You may also wish to leave a note for me on my talk page and I would be happy to reassess.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
Cabrils (talk) 03:25, 27 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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Hello, Hammer-Sabrine! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Cabrils (talk) 03:25, 27 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
thank you Cabrils
I appreciate your support and I will do my best to develop my skills.
Best regards Hammer-Sabrine (talk) 00:15, 28 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yahya Ekhou (January 29)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by TheBritinator were:
This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
TheBritinator (talk) 16:26, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Liberals Mauritania moved to draftspace[edit]

Thanks for your contributions to Liberals Mauritania. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it has no sources and the only external link is non-independent.. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. Timothytyy (talk) 01:20, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Cinema of Africa[edit]

Dear Hammer-Sabrine,
Thank you for your interest in this article. Can i make some remarks?
1. You added too many and bare links, which violate the layout. If you want to keep some of them, they could and should be couched in references using Template:Cite web, for instance. Compare with say Licínio Azevedo, or any other article using this template. (You can view the coding by just pressing the Edit button and not saving anything if you don't intend to.) Your links:

Isn't this a better reference: https://africultures.com/personnes/?no=53660 ?
2. Can we prove with a reliable source (not some blog or self-published text) that Ekhou won an award and so is of encyclopedic value?
3. Then it is still better to first start a separate biographical Wikipedia article on Mai Ekhou, before adding her to the overview article Cinema of Africa, you agree?
4. Your wording was that of a hard sell of Ekhou, is that appropriate for an encyclopedia?
Thank you, Cheers, Hansmuller (talk) 11:01, 3 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yahya Ekhou (February 7)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Cabrils was:
This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
Please address the issues I raise in my first comment before submitting again to avoid disappointment. Additionally, the External Links should be reduced to the absolute minimum.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
Cabrils (talk) 22:25, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Cinema of Africa (2)[edit]

Dear Hammer-Sabrine,
Thank you for the improvements you made to your biography of Mauritanian film director Mai Ekhou, using templates and more. Can i make some further remarks?

  • The article Cinema of Africa is intended as a balanced overview article, for the most famous filmmakers. Therefore, we should not accommodate all upcoming interesting filmmakers in the main text. (But we could list them in the section Cinema_of_Africa#Directors_by_country if they are of encyclopedic value). For an encyclopedia, it works best to first give personalities their own separate and dedicated biography, before mentioning them succinctly in an overview article. Rungano Nyoni for instance got four lines. Jimmy Wales, one of the founders of Wikipedia, was inspired by the Encyclopedia Brittanica, still more expert and stylistically superior than this Wikipedia. The Brittanica wouldn't put a person's whole biography in an overview.
  • So isn't it better to first start a separate biography for Mai Ekhou, before we perhaps might mention her briefly on the overview page, you agree?
  • I removed the Ekhou section from Cinema of Africa and save the latest version below.
    Thank you for your interest and your work, Cheers, Hansmuller (talk) 10:57, 15 February 2024 (UTC):[reply]

Latest version on Mai Ekhou from article Cinema of Africa

Mai Ekhou, a Mauritanian filmmaker and photographer.

Mai Ekhou,[1] born in Nouakchott, Mauritania, in 1987, spent her childhood and youth in Libya and Tunisia. She is a versatile artist involved in both photography and filmmaking. Since 2011, she has garnered international acclaim for her photography,[2] participating in various competitions and exhibitions. In filmmaking since 2012, Ekhou has served as an assistant director and independent director, acclaimed for her work, which has earned her numerous awards.[3] She is recognized as the first women Mauritanian director.[4]

Recognized as an Influential African Woman in Society (2017) by British Oxfam.[5][6]

Elected as a member of the selection and arbitration committees at various festivals: - SFTF Film Festival - Columbia. - Hollywood Las Vegas Film Festival - United States. - Kobani International Film Festival - Syria. - Jerusalem Visual Media Festival - Jerusalem.

She got Jury Prize, Nouakchott International Film Festival (2015), Mention at the Arab International Film Festival[7] in Gabes (2016), First place in the short film competition at the Arab Youth Creativity Festival in Cairo (2019)[8],Third place at the African Oscar Festival in Cairo (2019),[9] Special mention from the jury, International Film Festival in Iran (2019).

producing notable works such as (The End-2014)[10] ("Ishtar and Isis- 2015," )( First Box- 2016)[11] ("Bells"-2017)( It's not over yet- 2019)[12] ( Gone and Never Back -2020)[13][14] ("Pastitsio" (2020)[15] "70 Women" (2021)

  1. ^ "Mai Ekhou". Mai Ekhou. Retrieved 2024-02-04.
  2. ^ LensCulture. "WINNERS—Black & White Photography Awards 2022". LensCulture. Retrieved 2024-02-03.
  3. ^ "AWARDS". Mai Ekhou. Retrieved 2024-02-03.
  4. ^ Ellerson, Beti (2020-05-21). "AFRICAN WOMEN IN CINEMA BLOG: Mauritanian Women in Cinema, Visual Media and Screen Culture". AFRICAN WOMEN IN CINEMA BLOG. Retrieved 2024-02-04.
  5. ^ "Manarat : Stories of inspiring women from the Middle East and North Africa - Euro-Mediterranean Women's Foundation". Euromedwomen.foundation. 2017-08-22. Retrieved 2024-02-05.
  6. ^ "Tarikhi - The Journal of Arab World Voices (English Edition) by Sharq.Org - Issuu". issuu.com. 2018-11-18. Retrieved 2024-02-05.
  7. ^ "Facebook". www.facebook.com. Retrieved 2024-02-05.
  8. ^ "الموريتانية مي مصطفى تفوز بمسابقة مهرجان إبداع للشباب العربي | سدنة الحرف". sadanatoualharf.com. Retrieved 2024-02-05.
  9. ^ الحسن, أحمدُ ولد (2019-09-10). "مخرجة موريتانية ضمن الفائزين بأوسكار الإبداع الإفريقي صحراء ميديا". saharamedias.net (in Arabic). Retrieved 2024-02-05.
  10. ^ "Fierté et réalité du cinéma mauritanien". RFI (in French). 2014-12-09. Retrieved 2024-02-03.
  11. ^ "The First Box". www.luxorafricanfilmfestival.com. Retrieved 2024-02-05.
  12. ^ Ellerson, Beti (2020-05-20). "AFRICAN WOMEN IN CINEMA BLOG: RECENT FILMS - Mai Mustafa Ekhou : It's not over yet (Mauritania)". AFRICAN WOMEN IN CINEMA BLOG. Retrieved 2024-02-04.
  13. ^ "Embora pra Sempre" (in Brazilian Portuguese). Retrieved 2024-02-03.
  14. ^ Post, Redazione Versilia (2022-07-20). "C'era una volta l'Africa, visioni di video in mostra". VersiliaPost (in Italian). Retrieved 2024-02-05.
  15. ^ Aomar, Ali (2021-11-25). "Printemps reporté et Papicha : Deux films algériens primés au Maroc" (in French). Retrieved 2024-02-04.
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