User talk:Hank42

June 2014

Hello, I'm Excirial. Wikipedia is written by people who have a wide diversity of opinions, but we try hard to make sure articles have a neutral point of view. Your recent edit to Steve Brozak seemed less than neutral to me, so I removed it for now. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Excirial ^{(Contact me,Contribs)} 19:06, 9 June 2014 (UTC)

Steve Brozak

You just reversed some changes I made to the Steve Brozak page. I am very familiar with the subject and with his consent did a couple of things. First, I was in the process of consolidating the publication list. It was far too long for anyone to go through. Second, I was trying to shorten the corporate life biography, which also had become a long explanation of Mr. Brozak's work life. The object is to make the page more concise, more readable and more accurate.

I hope I can recover the publication list that I created in the corporate section and use it to replace the list in the publications sections from a previous version since I just spent two hours compiling and reviewing it.

I appreciate Wiki's integrity and would not do anything to knowingly compromise it. This is a work in progress, attempting to improve quality and accuracy.

Please feel free to contact me at hbassman@comcast.net or to call (908) 693=9999-mobile or (908) 522-9212. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hank42 (talk • contribs) 19:29, 9 June 2014 (UTC)

I assume that "very familiar" equals "Employed as a PR consultant" for Mr. Brozak? (This being more of an educated guess than an assumption though). If that is the case i would have to point to the conflict of interest policy, and in particular the sections discussing Paid editing and promotional editing. I do note that your edits don't seem to be an attempt to create a glorified autobiography for Mr. Brozak. Even so, while the page is definitely not as blatantly promotional as some, the structure and presence of multiple peacock terms give it a clear aftertaste of promotional editing (Especially the peacock wording is quite prevalent throughout the entire article.)

But to answer your question - all edits made to an article are present in the page history which can be found here. You can easily access any historical revision from there, and copy its content or restore it. Excirial ^{(Contact me,Contribs)} 12:53, 14 June 2014 (UTC)