User talk:HelloIAMSME
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Hello, HelloIAMSME, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Brianda and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:02, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
Bria Sullivan draft feedback[edit]
Hi @HelloIAMSME, I checked out your outline and so far seems like you are on track. Keep in mind, your writing for Wikipedia will summarize what independent, reliable, secondary sources have said about a topic, so that a Wikipedia reader can get an overview of the current thoughts and understanding of that topic. The goal is to provide a neutral, fact based summary of the topic at hand based off the reliable sources you've found on Bria Sullivan. I didn't see many reliable sources listed on the sandbox, so below are a few that I found after a quick search.
- https://time.com/5129336/google-3d-exhibition-african-american-history-museum/
- https://www.bet.com/article/bc912o/tech-giants-only-hire-the-whitest-black-candidates
- https://peopleofcolorintech.com/woc/googler-bria-sullivan-on-negotiating-as-a-woman-of-color-and-why-your-mentors-and-team-mates-really-matter/
You can check out this training module for a quick refresher on what's considered a reliable source. Also check out the article Marsha Rhea Williams as a good example to follow when structuring your article, and for a clear, neutral writing style. Feel free to reach out with any questions, just remember to ping me. Looping in @9Starbucks. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:52, 28 October 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you Brianda for the feedback and some more reliable sources. HelloIAMSME (talk) 17:56, 28 October 2023 (UTC)