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This is an automated message from CorenSearchBot. I have performed a web search with the contents of Dr hirsch, and it appears to be a substantial copy of http://www.biail.org/hirsch.htm. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or printed material; such additions will be deleted. You may use external websites as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences.

This message was placed automatically, and it is possible that the bot is confused and found similarity where none actually exists. If that is the case, you can remove the tag from the article and it would be appreciated if you could drop a note on the maintainer's talk page. CorenSearchBot (talk) 19:28, 17 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion of Dr hirsch[edit]

A tag has been placed on Dr hirsch requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the article appears to be a blatant copyright infringement. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted. You may use external websites as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words.

If the external website belongs to you, and you want to allow Wikipedia to use the text — which means allowing other people to modify it — then you must include on the external site the statement "I, (name), am the author of this article, (article name), and I release its content under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.2 and later." You might want to look at Wikipedia's policies and guidelines for more details, or ask a question here.

If you think that this notice was placed here in error, you may contest the deletion by adding {{hangon}} to the top of the page that has been nominated for deletion (just below the existing speedy deletion or "db" tag), coupled with adding a note on the talk page explaining your position, but be aware that once tagged for speedy deletion, if the article meets the criterion it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag yourself, but don't hesitate to add information to the article that would would render it more in conformance with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. Otolemur crassicaudatus (talk) 19:29, 17 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

This article reads like a resume rather than an encyclopedia article (and I've tagged it as such). Please look at the Wikipedia welcome page for information on how to create articles, and for the Manual of Style. Poor articles that are irretrievable are likely to be deleted. In addition, please note that it is recommended that editors do not edit or create articles about subjects that they are involved with as this may cause a conflict of interest. Wikipedia is not a vehicle for advertising or promoting people or services. -- MightyWarrior (talk) 00:23, 28 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for remove a lot of the superfluous material. As you will see, I've moved the Dr hirsch article to Alan Hirsch (neurologist) as this conforms to the Wikipedia Manual of Style for article names. I've also done some significant tidying and wikifying of the text so that it reads even more like an encyclopedia article and is more in keeping with Wikipedia's style. There still seems to be slightly too many external links – these could be seen as spam; it would be helpful if you could trim these down to, say, three or four important ones. Regards. -- MightyWarrior (talk) 09:12, 1 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]