User talk:Inkian Jason/Archive 7

Moscow Department of Transportation

↑ Just an article I was surprised didn't exist and which I wrote after your Wheely WP:ER --Psiĥedelisto (talk • contribs) ^{please always ping!} 14:15, 10 June 2022 (UTC)

@Psiĥedelisto: I'm glad my request prompted the creation of a new entry! Thanks again for your continued help. Inkian Jason (talk) 19:04, 10 June 2022 (UTC)

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🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 00:37, 11 October 2022 (UTC)

WiTricity Ja Physicist name etc.

Regarding your ja:利用者:Inkian Jason/WiTricity Japanese translation draft of WiTricity, I gave a once over and below are my 2cents worth:

• I would try to transliterate names/corporate names into Japanese as much as possible, and use {{illm}} template if the person/entity has a page in other language wiki: マーリン・ソルヤチッチ
  • His name I verified at on a Nikkei article, though unfortunately his first name is misstated as マーチン Martin[1]
    • I've tried adding as many links to company names as possible. Inkian Jason (talk) 15:57, 20 October 2022 (UTC)

• Also probably bit heavy on katakana words, e.g. "reference design" is better understood in Japanese "参照設計図"

• There is a wikilink to ワイヤレス電力伝送 and it says "非接触電力伝送などとも呼ばれる" so saying both ワイヤレス and 非接触 would seem redundant

• "～のライセンス供与" part seems also bit redundant or overwrought since 技術供与 is glossed as "licensing of technology"

• "交流（AC）電力が流れ"→"交流（AC）が流れ" and "直流（DC）電流を"→"直流（DC）を" seem sufficient
  •  Done Diff. Inkian Jason (talk) 15:57, 20 October 2022 (UTC)

• Probably should add corresponding blue links to tech terms wherever opportunity presents
  • 振動電磁場→振動磁場 should normally be usable except currently (no pun intended) this redirects specifically to an NMR-related topic
    • I've added as many links as possible. Inkian Jason (talk) 16:16, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
    •  Done I've replaced 振動電磁場 with 振動磁場. Inkian Jason (talk) 16:16, 20 October 2022 (UTC)

• "11kWまでの充電率" → "11kWまでの充電出力"、the former word sounds like "power charge percentage" and the latter seems to be the phraseology used when I googled
  •  Done Inkian Jason (talk) 16:16, 20 October 2022 (UTC)

--Kiyoweap (talk) 19:50, 19 October 2022 (UTC)

Oops. I guess the wikilinks in Japanese turn red unless I post in ja.wikipedia. my bad. --Kiyoweap (talk) 19:51, 19 October 2022 (UTC)

@Kiyoweap Thank you so much for reviewing the draft! I've tried in earnest to update the article per your requests here (I've noted above which concerns I've tried to address). However, some of these are difficult to execute as a non-Japanese speaker. Might you be willing to make the other (seemingly small) changes to the draft and copy over to the main space on my behalf? I hope you view this as a much better draft than ja:WiTricity, and thanks for any assistance getting this over the finish line. Thanks again for your assistance. Inkian Jason (talk) 16:20, 20 October 2022 (UTC)

Probably better if you post yourself since Ja wiki has tended to be more strict on rules of attributions, though they may have become more lax.

Also need to indicate the source article using "View History" tab, and give its date or 10digit oldid

So just past into ja:ワイトライシティ and in edit summary write [[:en:WiTricity]](oldid [[:en:special:permalink/1104676065|1104676065]])より翻訳 --Kiyoweap (talk) 12:55, 21 October 2022 (UTC)

Ok, thank you. While I prefer not to edit articles directly, I've copied over the markup per your permission and tried my best to disclose appropriately (both in the edit summary and on the article's Talk page). Please let me know if there's anything else you need from me here. Thanks again for your assistance! Inkian Jason (talk) 16:30, 21 October 2022 (UTC)

User:Kiyoweap, someone has reverted my edit at Japanese Wikipedia. I've asked why on the talk page. Are you willing to weigh in or update the article per ja:利用者:Inkian Jason/WiTricity? Inkian Jason (talk) 17:08, 7 November 2022 (UTC)