User talk:Ivonneraya1998

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Hello, Ivonneraya1998, and Welcome to Wikipedia!

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Hello, Ivonneraya1998, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:57, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Feedback

Hi. Your draft isn't ready to go live yet. It still needs a fair amount of work

• You need to make sure that everything in the article in supported by inline references. While you list some references at the end of your article, it isn't clear how they connect to the statements in the article.
• You need better sources. The sources you're using include blogs (which generally don't meet Wikipedia's standards for reliability) and a university website (which isn't an independent source).
• The language you use isn't always appropriate for an encyclopaedia entry. For example, you write Her entire life revolves in contributing for a better educated future - this isn't the kind of neutral, factual language that a Wikipedia article needs.

I have also linked to a handout on writing biographies - there's a lot of helpful information there. Please give it a read. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:24, 10 May 2021 (UTC)