User talk:Jmbre21

This user is a student editor in University_of_Wyoming/Architectural_History_(Fall_2019) .

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Hello, Jmbre21, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:15, 6 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review[edit]

Hello!

I reviewed your edits to the article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Maya_architecture and would like to share my thoughts. The grammatical edits and reworking of sentence structure worked really well! Including the piece about the measuring system was also informative and interesting, although it would have been stronger with some sort of visual representation, like a photo. Overall, your edits were really strong and successful in my opinion!.

--Sbridge4 (talk) 02:56, 9 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Added a peer review page to your user profile. Overall, good work on your edits to Maya Architecture. You've added quality content from reputable sources. However, the Lead that you revised is not objective and does not summarize the article, rather it includes value judgements and reads like the opening paragraph from an essay. Consider revising this. Otherwise, good job. Tdavis47 (talk) 00:26, 10 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]