User talk:Joan Million

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Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Kimiyo

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Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Voyage à La Mer

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Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. This is a notice that the page you created, Draft:Voyage à La Mer, was tagged as a test page under section G2 of the criteria for speedy deletion and has been or soon may be deleted. Please use the sandbox for any other test edits you may want to do. Take a look at the welcome page if you would like to learn more about contributing to our encyclopedia.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator, or if you have already done so, you can place a request here. --Min☠︎rax^«¦talk¦» 10:32, 10 February 2024 (UTC)

Re: Kimiyo

Hi,

I am answering here instead of on Liz's talk page because it will be easier for you to find the answer here and Liz's talk page is so busy. There are two issues tagged on Kimiyo. The first is that the article is an orphan. This means that there are no articles that link to this article. You can fix that by linking to this article from other article that refer to this album such as Alex Henry Foster. The second issue us the tone of the writing. I'm not really seeing a huge issue, so you should contact the person the person who added the tag, User:Gronk Oz, who can provide more information on what they feel needs addressing.

As a general note, you can get help with editing from the Teahouse. -- Whpq (talk) 17:54, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

Thank you very much for your (quick) help Whpq! One last question, if I may. I'm trying to link Alex Henry Foster's wiki page to Kimiyo's and I'm unable to find how I should do it. Is there a page offering guidance for that? I've look for it and can't seem to figure out how to "un-orphan" or "link" a page.

Thank you for your impression on the tone. I'll be sure to work on it and get in touch with the Wiki user who added the tag.

Once again, thank you for all the useful help! Joan Million (talk) 14:55, 16 April 2024 (UTC)

Square brackets are your friend! [[topic you want to link goes here]]. For a more detailed explanation, see H:WIKILINK. -- Whpq (talk) 17:05, 16 April 2024 (UTC)

I have reviewed the article again, and I decided to remove the Tone tag. But it really does need improvement. My concern is that it reads more like an interview with the musician, where he talks about his inspiration, and his creative process, and his impressions of his collaborators, etc. It is largely the artist commenting about his own work. But that is not what an encyclopaedic article is about. People talking about themselves (or about their own creations) should form a very minor part of any article; most of it should be a summary of what reliable sources that are independent of the subject have published about it.--Gronk Oz (talk) 01:45, 17 April 2024 (UTC)

Thank you very much for your help and for taking the time to edit and revisit the article. Indeed, I used newspaper articles, music reviews and features to create this Wiki article. I will try to look for more links and factual information to add in the future. Once again, thank you for your useful assistance! Joan Million (talk) 15:14, 17 April 2024 (UTC)

Thank you very much for your help! With the assistance you provided me, I believe I linked it correctly to Alex Henry Foster's article page and removed the tag. Once again, thank you Whpq. Joan Million (talk) 15:11, 17 April 2024 (UTC)

Hello @Whpq, hope you're well. I would have a quick question.

There's a description that has been added at the top of the page I created - which seems to have been an add on by Wikipedia itself. Is it a way to remove it?

Here's the page link : Kimiyo

Thanks again for all your help! Joan Million (talk) 12:32, 29 April 2024 (UTC)