User talk:KassideSE
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Welcome to Wikipedia! NicHT495 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 19:59, 18 February 2019 (UTC)
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:41, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
Hi Classmate[edit]
Hey, this is Josh, good job. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jahh21 (talk • contribs) 20:17, 27 February 2019 (UTC)
Hey what's up @Rosh1627:
Peer Review - Mason Bissada[edit]
Lead I found the lead does a good job of representing the article as a whole. I understand what the topic is and the importance of it. It reflects the most important information, such as the themes of the poems and the relevance of the topic in today's society. If anything, perhaps you could dedicate a section or paragraph to the collection's cultural impact, since you reference in the lead that it can be found on syllabuses.
Structure The sections are presented in the correct order IMO. Each section is the perfect length for its importance to the overall article. Perhaps the paragraphs after the list of poems could be taken out of the anthology section and placed in its own section (i.e. plot, subject matter etc.).
Balance/Neutrality The only thing I found that might not be considered neutral is this sentence under "Duffy's Life" : "It can be argued that Duffy exemplifies the different roles of women from different perspectives." Perhaps find a scholarly article that makes this argument and then cite that article.
Sources I could be wrong, but it appears that most of the sourcing comes from other Wikipedia articles. Seems good to me!
Review The article is very good at explaining the subject to someone who has never heard of the poems or its author (like me). I was very impressed by your diction; it sounded scholarly and professional, like an actual encyclopedia article. I think a section on either the collection's cultural impact or its critical response would give the article a bit more scope. The way your article is organized is exactly how I hope mine will turn out when it's done! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Masonbissada (talk • contribs) 21:53, 16 April 2019 (UTC)