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Gender and pilot performance[edit]

Moving Draft:Gender and pilot performance to the Wikipedia: namespace was pure vandalism. To have moved it to mianspace would have been only slightly better. The whole point of moving to draft: space is so that the article can be peer-reviewed before publication. So please do not try and circumvent the process by moving the essay yourself. — RHaworth (talk · contribs) 12:40, 4 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gender and pilot performance (November 4)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This looks more like a report rather than a formal encyclopedia article. Cheers,

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SwisterTwister talk 19:03, 4 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

As you revise this article, take a look at Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Layout and Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section. These should give you a better idea of how a Wikipedia article is supposed to be structured. Also bear in mind that the style should be less conversational -terms like "nowadays" are rarely appropriate in a wiki article. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:22, 1 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gender and pilot performance (December 2)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Wikiisawesome was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

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/wia /tlk 04:08, 2 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! KennyW1215, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! /wia /tlk 04:08, 2 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gender and pilot performance (December 2)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Timtrent was:

This appears to be a duplicate of another submission, Draft:Factors associated with aviation accidents, which is also waiting to be reviewed. To save time we will consider the other submission and not this one.

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Fiddle Faddle 13:15, 2 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

December 2015[edit]

Hi, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. It appears that you tried to give Draft:Factors associated with aviation accidents a different title by copying its content and pasting either the same content, or an edited version of it, into another page with a different name. This is known as a "cut-and-paste move", and it is undesirable because it splits the page history, which is legally required for attribution. Instead, the software used by Wikipedia has a feature that allows pages to be moved to a new title together with their edit history.

In most cases, once your account is four days old and has ten edits, you should be able to move an article yourself using the "Move" tab at the top of the page (the tab may be hidden in a dropdown menu for you). This both preserves the page history intact and automatically creates a redirect from the old title to the new. If you cannot perform a particular page move yourself this way (e.g. because a page already exists at the target title), please follow the instructions at requested moves to have it moved by someone else. Also, if there are any other pages that you moved by copying and pasting, even if it was a long time ago, please list them at Wikipedia:Requests for history merge. Thank you. Fiddle Faddle 13:17, 2 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I'm Serols. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one of your recent contributions —the one you made with this edit to Draft:Factors associated with aviation accidents— because it didn’t appear constructive to me. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Serols (talk) 19:08, 2 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gender and pilot performance (December 3)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This appears to be a duplicate of another submission, Gender and pilot performance, which is also waiting to be reviewed. To save time we will consider the other submission and not this one.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 02:30, 3 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Factors associated with aviation accidents (December 3)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Timtrent was:

This draft contains WP:OR and cannot "fly" in this state. You may not draw conclusions. You may only report the conclusions of others.

Beware, also WP:SYNTH which requires detailed reading

Attend to the red errors in the citations, please

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Factors associated with aviation accidents and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Fiddle Faddle 11:27, 3 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Factors associated with aviation accidents has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Factors associated with aviation accidents. Thanks! Fiddle Faddle 11:40, 3 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Factors associated with aviation accidents has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Factors associated with aviation accidents. Thanks! Fiddle Faddle 11:43, 3 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Factors associated with aviation accidents concern[edit]

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Factors associated with aviation accidents, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

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Your draft article, Draft:Factors associated with aviation accidents[edit]

Hello, KennyW1215. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Factors associated with aviation accidents".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Puffin ^{Let's talk!} 08:55, 26 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]