User talk:Khan ali10
Hey!!
Physics in medieval Islam . I would like to work on this page because it is a stub page and can be greatly expanded upon. Astronomy is a part of physics and there is no mention of the astronomers and astronomic theories that came out of the Islamic empire. Khan ali10 (talk) 21:21, 23 May 2013 (UTC)
Hi! I see that you've settled on Book of Optics for your class project. I just wanted to repeat a bit of info I posted to your classmate who was considering it: the article is really bare, but it's actually covered in moderate detail in the Alhazen article, and even more detail in a reverted version of the Book of Optics article. Check out the talk page: Talk:Book_of_Optics#re_stub. One approach might be to begin with that old version and start verifying that the cited sources actually back up what is in that version. (The editor who wrote much of that version was banned because of "abuse of sources", but some of it is probably good, and reading the sources yourself will put you on the right track.) If you go that route, be sure to only include content that you can vouch for based on your own reading of the cited sources. Good luck!--ragesoss (talk) 20:57, 27 May 2013 (UTC)
Hi Ali,
I chose your site to review, however, there is very little there. I also went to the "talk" portion of the article and found several statements that were less then professional. The statements included grammar and sentence structure problems, plus biased statements. I hope none of these were aimed at you.
See you in class, Niccole — Preceding unsigned comment added by NAdele (talk • contribs) 13:18, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
- @NAdele: Did you see the sandbox where Ali has been working, User:Khan_ali10/sandbox. It hasn't made its way to the article yet.--ragesoss (talk) 13:21, 4 June 2013 (UTC)