User talk:KimberlyKassis
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Everything in the first paragraph is relevant to the topic. There is a lot of description about similar effects but not enough information about the actual effect. This makes it hard to understand the shock wave aspect of atmospheric focusing. This article could be strengthened by more examples of this phenomenon and less scientific jargon that isn't fully explained. The article does a good job of linking to other articles when discussing related topics and examples which is helpful, but can sometimes be hard to understand without background information. I hope to expand on these examples and add additional information to this article!
KimberlyKassis (talk) 18:17, 14 October 2021 (UTC)