User talk:Kyriefmz

This user is a student editor in Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/University_of_Alberta/EASIA_236_(Fall_2020) .

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Hello, Kyriefmz, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:30, 28 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Min-Fan1 (talk) 15:55, 27 October 2020 (UTC) First of all, you're doing great. Your first paragraph is very clear and concise, you clearly and objectively explain the literary category of the central character and the characteristics of his work, and you explain to the reader that in the future after you have read "The General’s Head ", you will introduce Shi Zhecun's literary works. This gives the reader an idea of what you are going to cover in your next article, which is very good and I will learn from you. I think the advice I can give you is that, although your first paragraph is very detailed, I think you could write a little bit more about what you're going to design the rest of the article to reflect the most important information.[reply]

Links to user pages and sandboxes[edit]

Please do not introduce links in actual articles to user pages or sandboxes, as you did at Modernism. Since these pages have not been accepted as articles, user pages, sandboxes and drafts are not suitable for linking in articles. and such links are contrary to the Manual of Style. These links have been deleted, please do not re-add any such links, thank you - Arjayay (talk) 09:44, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Vtrading moved to draftspace[edit]

An article you recently created, Vtrading, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 14:07, 2 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Vtrading has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Vtrading. Thanks! Fade258 (talk) 06:03, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Vtrading (July 12)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by TheBirdsShedTears were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

It reads like an advertisement than presenting it in encyclopaedic article. Add only useful information and remove any unnecessary content for example "Specialties" and "Advantages". More importantly, please add multiple reliable sources independent of the subject. More on WP:YFA and WP:ORG. You may also read technology related articles on Wikipedia to get an idea how to develop an encyclopaedic article.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Vtrading and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Vtrading, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

TheBirdsShedTears (talk) 06:33, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Kyriefmz! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! TheBirdsShedTears (talk) 06:33, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Vtrading[edit]

Hello, Kyriefmz. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Vtrading, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 07:01, 12 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Vtrading[edit]

Hello, Kyriefmz. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Vtrading".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 06:37, 12 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]