User talk:Otkri
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:32, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
Peer Review[edit]
The lead to this section is very good and gives a very good introduction to the topic. I think the information brought up in the last paragraph of this section could possibly be expanded on in its own section, maybe you could add this section to the article?
One thing that could possible improve the structure of the article is instead choosing the heading title to be either "uses" or "values". I think you could keep it the way it is if you added more subcategories to "uses"; however, the way it is right now, I would just choose one heading or the other. Overall though, I would expand on the different uses of stance. The sample conversation that is included is very good, maybe you can include more examples similar to this?
I think adding a couple more sources to this article could be beneficial and make the article stronger, as well as general elaboration of the information that is already present.
Overall good job! Sb9338 (talk) 22:51, 24 February 2019 (UTC)
Peer review: Stance[edit]
Hey, nice page! Content appears neutral, useful and relevant. I suggest adding a citation for the first sentence that defines "Stance", also citation for "authorial stance"/"interpersonal" stance sentence. The example is really helpful! The links for all 4 citations don't lead anywhere (1, doesn't go anywhere, 2 & 3 lead to the same wiki page, 4 has no source). A google search with the terms and/or already provided information helped me find the right sources for the article I'm working on.