User talk:Presleyjackson/9 (2005 film)

Presley - -I don't think this draft is quite ready for peer review. It looks like it's so far mainly a recap of the plot summary from the original article with one additional source. ProfHanley (talk) 16:57, 5 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback 4/8[edit]

Okay. This is shaping up, and I will add it to the peer review queue. One issue: I think you need more sources (and maybe more of a variety). ProfHanley (talk) 15:26, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]