User talk:Rwmosgrove

June 2012

Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. Although everyone is invited to contribute, at least one of your recent edits, such as the one you made to Socialist Alternative (US), did not appear to be constructive and has been reverted or removed. Please use the sandbox for any test edits you would like to make, and read the welcome page to learn more about contributing constructively to this encyclopedia. Electriccatfish2 (talk) 21:40, 10 June 2012 (UTC)

I've been trying to improve several left-wing groups' wiki pages, including Socialist Alternative (US). You seem to be intent on adding an avalanche of material which is almost entirely sourced from issues of Justice, and not citing it well. You've removed several cites that I've placed, and the cites you've been adding have not been clearly formatted - before your latest round of revisions I had cleaned up every single citation on the page to match a template. At the same time, you've added voluminous detail to things that deserve a sentence or two, or a paragraph at best. I'm going to try editing it down, and I will have to remove any material that doesn't stand up to its own citations. Cadriel (talk) 10:22, 13 June 2012 (UTC)