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Tanya GA

Hello SMasters, I looked at your comments on the GA of Hurricane Tanya (1995), a majority of your issued are fixed. The only exception is finding another source outside of NHC. Thank you for reviewing, --12george1 (talk) 14:37, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

About the issue with a primary source for refs, I did make improvements because there three sources other than NHC/NOAA rather than one. Also, refs from more than one source is not part of the GA criteria. One other thing, there are several GA articles that do have that issue. In 1995 there is Hurricane Allison and Humberto with just two or three sources.--12george1 (talk) 00:50, 19 April 2010 (UTC)

WP:OVERLINK

Some of the links you removed from Middlesex (novel) per WP:OVERLINK may be appropriate because of WP:REPEATLINK. This came up at Talk:Middlesex (novel)/GA1. Best, Cunard (talk) 09:06, 15 April 2010 (UTC)

Follow the Leader

I'm pretty sure all the comments on the GA review have been fixed and responded to. CrowzRSA ^{23:33, 15 April 2010 (UTC)}

Re: Paper Trail

It's not actually my nomination (I just added in the template cuz the writer forgot). If no work has been done then just fail it. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:13, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

Skinny Jeanz and a Mic GA review

I'm still working on it, but I thought I had fixed the lead and made sure everything was included in the sections already. Candyo32 (talk) 03:44, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

I couldn't find "being called the sixth best album of 2009 by The New York Times" or "The album debuted at fifty-six on the Billboard 200" (the commercial response section says "The album debuted at number fifty-two on the U.S. Billboard 200"). -- S Masters (talk) 03:59, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

Okay, now fixed. Candyo32 (talk) 04:03, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

Thanks again for all your help! I've certainly learned somethings to watch out for in future GA's. Candyo32 (talk) 06:22, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

No problems, glad to help. And congrats once again for all the good work! -- S Masters (talk) 06:28, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

GAN for Paper Trail

Yes, I will do that tonight. I may have to finish tomorrow afternoon though. I've been very busy with King Uncaged, Love King and The R.E.D. Album. I do have a question about "The album received many award nominations and wins, including a nomination for Best Rap Album at the 2009 Grammy Awards.[56]. - What are these award nominations? Remove the period after the reference note." Can you clarify the bolded part? SE KinG. ^{User page.} _Talk. 05:23, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

OK, great. I will give you more time. What bolded part? -- S Masters (talk) 05:26, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

Opps I italicized it instead of bold... I fixed it now. SE KinG. ^{User page.} _Talk. 05:38, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

The statement says: "The album received many award nominations and wins..." - What are these award nominations and what did they win? The reference is about the Grammys (by the way, the link is broken). You should say what these other awards are, and provide the relevant references, or remove it from this sentence. -- S Masters (talk) 05:47, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

Ok, thank you for the clarification. I will defiantly work on those changes tomorrow. SE KinG. ^{User page.} _Talk. 05:52, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

Hey, sorry I still haven't gotten to Paper Trail, things have come up and I've been pretty busy. I'll get to it this week for sure. SE KinG. ^{User page.} _Talk. 12:08, 20 April 2010 (UTC)

OK, but it will be good to wrap things up by this week if possible. Thanks. -- S Masters (talk) 14:22, 20 April 2010 (UTC)

I did the main edit today. I fixed all of the things that you requested. However, I may clean the article more (including reformatting all the references to the citation format). SE KinG. ^{User page.} _Talk. 05:12, 21 April 2010 (UTC)

OK, I will have a look at it again in a day or two. -- S Masters (talk) 06:02, 21 April 2010 (UTC)

Post-industrial nomination

I added the template. Sorry about that, and thanks for reviewing it! Torchiest (talk | contribs) 12:00, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind, I'm withdrawing my nomination. Torchiest (talk | contribs) 17:22, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

OK, thanks for letting me know. -- S Masters (talk) 03:01, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

GOCE Reward Board Quest - Stage 2

Stage 2 of your reward board challenge completed with Family Guy (season 5), Dhumavati, and Mohini. Four more to go. NielsenGW (talk) 21:20, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

Excellent, well done! -- S Masters (talk) 02:33, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

Mohini

Please check the article (GAN). The copyedit is complete. Waiting for your comments. --Redtigerxyz ^Talk 03:51, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

I have put my comments on the GAN page. -- S Masters (talk) 05:42, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

Please check. --Redtigerxyz ^Talk 13:46, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

Thanks a lot. --Redtigerxyz ^Talk 15:58, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

No, thank you for all your hard work, and congratulations! :-) -- S Masters (talk) 16:00, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

Typhoon Nida (2004)

The GAN issues should be addressed now. Thegreatdr (talk) 04:07, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

I have put my comments on the GAN page. -- S Masters (talk) 05:43, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

Fine. It's gone. Thegreatdr (talk) 05:51, 18 April 2010 (UTC)