User talk:Sarbaer324

This user is a student editor in University_of_Cincinnati/ENGL_1001-34_English_Composition_(Fall_2018) .

Welcome![edit]

Hello, Sarbaer324, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:36, 2 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Articles Interested In[edit]

1. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eco-Kashrut - stub, Judaism AND eco friendly!!!!!! 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Erev_Shel_Shoshanim - written badly which i can help with! 3. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Facing_History_and_Ourselves - reads like a news article b/c of "sensationalism" but it's emotional!! 4. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hutu_Power - needs additional sources </3, super important topic 5. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Habitat_conservation - needs additional citations

Images[edit]

Hello, I saw that you have uploaded the image File:Eco Friendly.jpg, but it looks like it was deleted because it was out of scope. You may be able to get it back, but you'd have to show where the image would fit into the scope of Wikimedia Commons and Wikipedia. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:01, 26 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Eco-Kashrut[edit]

Hi, I've just reverted a number of changes you made to this article, because they were giving readers advice on what they could do to help the movement. Please take a look at WP:NOTGUIDE - that's not what Wikipedia is here for, however noble the cause. There was also content like 'The Torah teaches us...', which was written in the first person and so not appropriate. We need to write articles in a neutral tone, and so can't assume that the Torah (or Bible, or Quran, or whatever) teaches the reader anything. Please leave a message on my talk page, or reply here, if you'd like to discuss this. Cheers GirthSummit _(blether) 04:24, 28 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]