User talk:Sarockt

Congratulations! You logged in correctly. Please don't hesitate to let me know if you have any other questions about this assignment. Hoopes (talk) 03:15, 19 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

This is a nice article. Please note that I've made some minor edits to the language and have also corrected and added a number of hyperlinks. You should check all of the references to make sure that they are complete. I would also recommend checking the articles on Augustus Le Plongeon and Alice Dixon Le Plongeon to make sure that there is not too much redundancy with your article. You may actually find it makes more sense to cut and paste some of the information about each from your article to the respective articles about them. Remember, this article is about Queen Moo, so information about the Le Plongeons really belongs in the articles about them. (I would make sure that there are hyperlinks from those to your article once it goes into the mainspace.) You didn't cite this reference, but I think you would find much more information about Queen Moo in a recently published biography of Alice Dixon Le Plongeon by Lawrence Desmond, Yucatan Through Her Eyes: Alice Dixon Le Plongeon, Writer and Expeditionary Photographer. Hoopes (talk) 18:42, 11 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]