User talk:SealSquared
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Hello, SealSquared, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 04:52, 25 August 2022 (UTC)
Article Review[edit]
The content is all up to date adding content about countries that previously had little or no information. All content added is written in a neutral tone simply stating what the civic technology company is and what they do within the specific country. All sentences within the draft are supported by articles. However, the majority of the sources detailing the civic technology companies come from the website of the country the writer is speaking about. Overall, the content has improved the quality of the article as there were gaps in information about civic technology in certain Southern American countries and effectively provides examples. The main advice I could provide would be to use sources from websites other than the topic and to switch up transitions as the word "also" is used in the majority of your transitions. Gobears18 (talk) 02:42, 9 October 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review. I didn't realize I was using "also" a lot. I will definitely be switching it up. And I'll find more sources. SealSquared (talk) 23:25, 9 October 2022 (UTC)