User talk:Sean Dwyer
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 02:06, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
Annie Fisher Article[edit]
Overall, the article looks great! I loved the information and pictures, especially the sentence about the common sense. I do have some possible edits, don't feel obligated to use these at all if it doesn't make sense to you.
1) The introduction where you state her name and how she's a cook and caterer, and also the sentence discussing where she lived, you can put these sentences together to create a shorter intro. For example, "... was a cook, caterer, and entrepreneur who lived in Columbia, Missouri.."
2) Also the two headers: cooking and catering business, and entrepreneurship, you could put these together in one "Career" section and just separate them by paragraphs.
3) The first sentence under entrepreneurship, i would suggest flipping the sentence structure, basically just putting "Annie bought her first house in 1901, using the profits from her cooking and catering businesses she paid of the house in two years"
4) Also, i would make a separate section for death and legacy because she clearly has left behind many great recipes
Hope these suggestions help in some sort of way!
Summer.easley (talk) 17:05, 4 October 2016 (UTC)Summer EasleySummer.easley (talk) 17:05, 4 October 2016 (UTC)
Speedy deletion nomination of George Bingham Rollins[edit]
Hello Sean Dwyer,
I wanted to let you know that I just tagged George Bingham Rollins for deletion, because the article doesn't clearly say why the subject is important enough to be included in an encyclopedia.
If you feel that the article shouldn't be deleted and want more time to work on it, you can contest this deletion, but please don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.
You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions. R. A. Simmons Talk 19:15, 8 November 2016 (UTC)
Nomination of George Bingham Rollins for deletion[edit]
The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/George Bingham Rollins until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.
Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article until the discussion has finished.