User talk:Stormyruiz
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Evan Mayer final project peer review[edit]
- Good structure, nice concise lead section.
- parenthetical phrase under "Purpose of a chaperone" could be rephrased to add that link in a slightly less awkward way, but that may just be personal preference. I don't think there are any style guidelines about parenthetical statements like this.
- "phasing is good" could be elaborated or rephrased to include what constitutes good phasing.
- "us" under "Applications" could probably be removed/rephrased to maintain objective/impersonal voice, but the examples under the linked section suggest that this use case could go either way.
- A solid start for a new article!
Evanmayer1 (talk) 04:25, 2 June 2017 (UTC)
HCL_color_space confuses and intermixes information about at least two different "HCL"/"LCH" colorspaces[edit]
Please see
- this article completely confuses and intermixes information about at least two different "HCL"/"LCH" colorspaces
on Talk:HCL_color_space QuoJar (talk) 17:17, 26 September 2017 (UTC)