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Your submission at Articles for creation: Yeshayahu (Jesaiah) Ben-Aharon (September 3)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Greenman was:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Greenman (talk) 19:50, 3 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, TCWJ! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Greenman (talk) 19:50, 3 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yeshayahu (Jesaiah) Ben-Aharon (October 20)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by FeralOink was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Four of the nine sources are to the BLP subject's own work. We need NPOV, reputable, secondary or tertiary sources to establish notability on Wikipedia. The article is not written in an accessible, encyclopedic tone. The prose is dense and impenetrable, and half the article is a description of one of his books. The article needs far more inline references, and much more context to be suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Yeshayahu (Jesaiah) Ben-Aharon and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

FeralOink (talk) 13:38, 20 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Yeshayahu (Jesaiah) Ben-Aharon[edit]

Hello, TCWJ. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Yeshayahu (Jesaiah) Ben-Aharon, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 14:02, 22 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yeshayahu (Jesaiah) Ben-Aharon (January 6)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DoubleGrazing was:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please note that in articles on living people (WP:BLP), every material statement, anything potentially contentious, and all private personal details must be clearly supported by inline citations to reliable published sources, or else removed.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Yeshayahu (Jesaiah) Ben-Aharon and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:34, 6 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Yeshayahu (Jesaiah) Ben-Aharon has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Yeshayahu (Jesaiah) Ben-Aharon. Thanks! microbiologyMarcus ^{[petri dish·growths]} 18:02, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yeshayahu (Jesaiah) Ben-Aharon (March 7)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by MicrobiologyMarcus were:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

article is still promotional and personal information is not always cited, despite previous advice.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Yeshayahu (Jesaiah) Ben-Aharon and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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microbiologyMarcus ^{[petri dish·growths]} 18:03, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear microbiologyMarcus, Thanks for your comments. I’ll give the writing style another try to make it more encyclopedic, however, I am wondering about isuues of personal information not being cited, as I have included sources for all statements. Could you help specify so I understand which is the issue here? Might it me the referance to Ben-Aharon’s own publication regarding his education (which I maybe wrongly assumed was an ok source). Thank you. TCWJ (talk) 19:19, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yeshayahu (Jesaiah) Ben-Aharon (March 13)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Randompersonediting was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Yeshayahu (Jesaiah) Ben-Aharon and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

K-Pop contributor (✍️•📚) 02:45, 13 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]